Re: passion by lexicon	11-Aug-02/10:23 PM
sounds like something bacchus would salivate over and dode upon...therefore... you need help..call a friend or priest, or get drunk and commit, but do be careful...confess.CONFESS! or not.. <brought to you by frisky glove it's more than just a condom, it's more than just a glove.a
Re: Diminishing by <~>	11-Aug-02/10:17 PM
yes, you do, and so do i..thank the right hand for it's talent it may one day soon want another body. i'm not trusting it these days...hey z this is a 'ringer' great conrasts and noun selection. i must say i'm quite fond of your "yours selection". reads like a bullit kills with an honest days work! your hoof has been shoed! race on!u
Re: Colloid by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:25 PM
lol! i will smoke a fatty and agree..what a riot!l
Re: i was by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:19 PM
it will never stop flipping back over on itself...flopping back over onto me.??
Re: I like Cake by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:11 PM
nobody eats sherbert anymore
Re: big 'ol stupid by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:05 PM
holy fucking shit that is twice as good as acid and free. i will do that again then move on. your imagery is really supernatural divine saline.. quite rare. the title is what kicks the fence down. wow.fuck!e
Re: pull by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/10:43 PM
i enjoy your writing, and the simple ones too. you have impeccable taste. with a well rounded structue. pregnant yet starving.......i ring my bell for another! another, and another i am a poet you are a writer. we are both readers...yes we read...i need to read..you write well..your beak is a fine ceramic your hoof is sure footed...write to live!??
Re: alone by mia	9-Aug-02/8:37 PM
humans are ants, insects wear pants. smile. break out your chitin...e
Re: Sawdust by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/7:55 PM
i wanted to give you a ten, but then your overall score would have sky rocketed.this is a pure crack in your skull.. truly..i see too much light for your age..i must humble you..i must humble myself..do i have to be a redmark too? yes, i think i do..(this little diddy is fuckingkiller) you win the HORUS 8 TEN THAT GOT A ZERO FOR NO GOOD REASON AWARD CUZ ITS TOO GOOD ..don't worry others will come and bring much fruit to your alter, and i predict this will be on the top fifteen list before any of mine(honestly i don't pay attention, really) trust me..i am a ranc-amateur with hardly any real grasp of creative writing, but fuckin aye i can clam like a mad man. this is a wonderfull poem???
Re: The Things I love and Elempty by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/7:41 PM
nostradomus was a young man once also... with quatrains he saw submarines and zepplins, but alas i only saw sulphuric smoke noxious gas at delphi, no oracle..no ariels only fuel.. everything fuel..yes fuel
Re: The Advice by T.Becquerel II	9-Aug-02/6:22 PM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. mirror mirror on the wall who hath scribed in my bathroom stall.the mAster of qoutes except for two.the first and second line are all that's true! the rest is only entrails, and baba yaga's vagina hail. my kale gun has been drawn! stand fast for a calcium rich blast.l
Re: life sucks sometimes..ditto by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/5:58 PM
indeed...fix line three, and line nine (you'll see) now as for guns..guns are no fun my young gifted friend.our weapon is pen. the only way to get through these nasty mental fixations is to do it in story form..acting all of this stuff out could crack mothers nice tile counter. let's behave. i give you an 8 for your hate, but please correct typos. or not it works well too just let them go and bother old people's eyes. god's speed. <brought to you by 'pumptor' the only way to add girth to a skinny member, and 'white in' the paper, that corrects itself. good afternoon..c
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	9-Aug-02/5:45 PM
they have yet to bestow me with my well deserved laureateship...i must not slip and fall on top of the deans wife again..i am so close to nothing now that i can almost disengage machismo..no no no ..suck it in father i have sinned i have sinned by ending up just like you..thank you pharmaceutical boy (otep) for your kind words, but my father flannigan is beyond all perdition..we can never forgive him, but i must forgive myself..yes and touch the oil to my head and make the sign of the cross...yes oil..my head..the cross..the.....good boy smiles fangs and grows nails to perch to roost to phallic the name of.-----.shhhhhhh. pray to gozerh
Re: Stars In My Eyes by onlyontuesdays	9-Aug-02/5:29 PM
isn't that sweet.guillotine.rivet.jar.herpes.bank
Re: Dream Dead by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/5:26 PM
pheasant.pleasant.peasant imagery...i may never wake up with an erection again "the bus gives you a hard on with books in your lap" "she bleed a catholic wedding". that is why i loved her, the most of all(jim morrison in "") 6/10 kinda simple, but simple can be good.meat is good.eat more meatu
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	9-Aug-02/12:53 PM
so let me get this straight you have utter contempt for jews, blacks, and rape women with your friends...rip of other peoples writing (because you can't write) killed your grandparents....and you live in new mexico? you are friends with jesus? which jesus are we talking about here, because mexican drug dealing gang bangers do not constitute the son of god....you are either completely contemptuous of not only yourself, but the entire human race, or socially retarded...what? shoes to tight..mom a whore?..get over it..you reek of puss and self loathing, and because of this your written words have no meaningful points within their polluted presense. you are beyond the mark of failure! you are incomplete and absent. p.s you deserve a shaq attack in your arse.why couldn't you have been on the platform that fell in the shark tank? Because trailer trash has not enough money to travel..and not enough memory to count. in all definitions of the that word..good day, sir 
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	9-Aug-02/11:50 AM
yoda jr.yoda jr.yoda jr. it would be pointless and slumming in my mind to retort. therefore, i shall instead compliment you on your incredible ability to speak so clearly, so in depth, and all with out a tongue! (he lost it giving cpr to a seizure stricken fellow Mcdonald's employee) you my friend are a trooper. grunt with pride! sign with joy! your love of your fellow man goes beyond the call of duty. the extra mile. this buds for you. <brought to you by tic-tic the only insecticide breath mint created to date accidentally.>
Re: Sleep Well by jriemerm	9-Aug-02/1:07 AM
this is a radical brash piece of proper teeth twisting writables. YOU GET THE HORUS8 GOLDEN CUE-TIP AWARD FOR INSOMNIACS THAT CARE BROTHER. sleep well hitchcocks dead and so are the birds!10/10s
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	9-Aug-02/12:47 AM
it starts out like...oh fuck me not this again, but then the bullshark and Avon come limping to the rescue <bullsharks occupy fresh water also, so lake campers BEWARE> drink red bull, brought to you by 'cork' it's more than just a floating reminder!e
Re: -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus	9-Aug-02/12:39 AM
So, you can cut and paste. it's his comment you rascist puke (i read black buns). What? so you added a the last paragraph!the title is the best thing you've written to date AND HALF OF THAT ISN'T EVEN ORIGINAL.in fact the whole thing isn't even original. therefore you my friend are totally unoriginal, and you should beat yourself to death with a nasty borrowed baseball cap that reads "mustache rides 5 cents". you fail!