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alone (Free verse) by mia
bored tired forgotten in a solitary place abandoned by joy filled with despair touched by grief and in pain that comes from being alone in a dead world teaming with life some shattered some whole some ignored and in solace they find contentment, peace in groups of people pretending to understand the world society each other and in trying they drown in a make-believe paradise in a struggle to understand the concept of uniqueness in a world that only allows and accepts uniformity

Up the ladder: Angel
Down the ladder: the trite scifi plot

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.9166667
Weighted score: 4.2080197
Overall Rank: 13223
Posted: May 12, 2002 3:40 AM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2002 3:40 AM PDT
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[2] nentwined @ 66.47.71.146 | 29-May-02/11:00 AM | Reply
no thanks.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Aug-02/8:37 PM | Reply
humans are ants, insects wear pants. smile. break out your chitin...e
[0] god'swife @ 67.73.35.29 | 13-Oct-03/1:43 PM | Reply
More of the same... Underdeveloped, undercooked, underbreed, undernourished, underacted, underage underdrawers(of the stinky variety).
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