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alone (Free verse) by mia
bored
tired
forgotten
in a solitary place
abandoned by joy
filled with despair
touched by grief
and
in pain
that comes from being
alone
in a dead world
teaming with life
some shattered
some whole
some ignored
and
in solace
they find contentment,
peace
in groups of people
pretending to understand
the world
society
each other
and
in trying
they drown in a make-believe
paradise
in a struggle
to understand
the concept of
uniqueness
in a world
that only allows
and accepts
uniformity
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.9166667
Weighted score: 4.2080197
Overall Rank: 13223
Posted: May 12, 2002 3:40 AM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2002 3:40 AM PDT
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