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flickering light (Free verse) by yarlgrenn
Tortoise shells were raining from my forehead today.
I almost caught it: nose bleeding, head thrumming.
The bedclothes were all twisted up
my toes' thick nails were pounding beneath the skin;
there was a mess of daisies and lilies and snapdragons.
"What?" I said to you. "What!"
but there was no reply:
Rising, deciding to dance:
placing those pink buffalo slippers upon my dainty feet.
It was there you made your mistake:
underestimating my resolve.
"This ring: take-it, take-it.
"I beg you: take it
"for I wish to blow away in the wind.
"My black umbrella catches
"and I float away from you forever
"among lands of spice and dreams-made-reel."
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Weighted score: 4.112286
Overall Rank: 13300
Posted: May 10, 2002 1:43 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 1:57 PM PDT
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