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My Torcher Chamber (Free verse) by angel born in hell
There is a place inside my head, a place where everything is dead. A place with no love only hate, the only things that can judge my fate. The place is like a burning pit of hell, sorounded by bars like jail. It's a place for my mind, a place I like to hide. My torcher chamber is a living hell, but sometimes it's the only place left to go. Because it's all in my mind, a place you can't see only find

Up the ladder: Night on the Towne
Down the ladder: flickering light

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.7142857
Weighted score: 4.1163354
Overall Rank: 13299
Posted: July 25, 2002 11:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2002 11:06 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.149 | 26-Jul-02/6:30 AM | Reply
don't ever leave that place. not even for food. learn to spell.
[n/a] gay @ 167.206.181.179 | 26-Jul-02/7:03 AM | Reply
www.dictionary.com
see also: www.getafuckinglife.com
[3] titan69 @ 195.93.50.153 | 1-Aug-02/1:28 PM | Reply
STARTS OF OK BUT THEN FALLS IN A BURNING PIT OF HELL
[0] limonade @ 198.164.250.48 | 2-Sep-02/10:32 PM | Reply
One who spells as badly as you should not even be permitted to attempt to write poetry. This is one of the biggest pieces of shit I have ever read. How old are you? 12? This is a shining example of emotional immaturity. Grow up. Cheer up. Can the angst. Lose that bad dye job. Buy clothes that are some colour other than black. Smell a flower. Pet a kitten. For crying out loud...
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