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I like Cake (Free verse) by skaskowski the universal eye
dangles from a chain
swinging with a gravity
of its
own.
it sees every mistake
and every little thing that
was ever done
that will ever be said or done.
eye
aye aye aye
what an eye.
What a guy!
He's got a big big eye.
Universal!
if he
cry aye ayed...
it would be
big big tears
what huge tears!
like a raining storm of water droplets.
Universal!
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7488 Comments:
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I feel like there's some joke here that I'm missing. Kind of has a flow, though.
yeah. check out s.2.
nobody eats sherbert anymore
I eat sherbert all the time.It's yummy.
The 1st paragraph gets a ten. The rest doesn't
aww, i thought she loved me. damn.
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