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I like Cake (Free verse) by skaskowski

the universal eye dangles from a chain swinging with a gravity of its own. it sees every mistake and every little thing that was ever done that will ever be said or done. eye aye aye aye what an eye. What a guy! He's got a big big eye. Universal! if he cry aye ayed... it would be big big tears what huge tears! like a raining storm of water droplets. Universal!

god'swife 22-Aug-02/11:16 PM
The 1st paragraph gets a ten. The rest doesn't




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