| Re: A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum |
14-Aug-02/5:35 PM |
|
what a riot...definetly a rockford fosgate 12" woofer. 8/10??
|
|
|
 |
| Re: The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/5:31 PM |
|
yeah..i know..i know, it's a really old piece, but i kinda enjoyed editing it for this site by leaving in the childish shit cuz it is so fucking silly sounding and cutesy..i thought fuck it..it's more homely that way. nobody likes a writer that can't laugh at their own adolescent whining and pining, and i'ts interesting to compare it to what i'm doing now..i think?..ah fuck it anyways..moving on..
|
|
|
|
| Re: Strange but true by ==Doylum |
14-Aug-02/4:32 PM |
|
horus8 AWARD FOR GETTING ALL THAT OUT WITH A MOUTH FULL OF MASHED POTATOS award goes to "danny boy" this afternoon.this piece is fucking hilarious i've already e-mailed it to the holy ghost and all of his disciples. your face is splendid! 9/10..
|
|
|
|
| Re: Alone by Lil_Chick_512 |
14-Aug-02/12:30 PM |
|
of course they care, that's why you're still around to write this. i was kinda hoping for a little more graphic violence, i was expecting evil dead part 2, instead i got a hello kitty slumber party, and i was not even invited...i look great in drag especially with a steak knife and no friends........suicide.realism.sadism.shirt-tales.killer-whales.welcome back kotter lunch box...h
|
|
|
|
| Re: Derailed by brazen |
14-Aug-02/12:18 PM |
|
you had drueling for the end then you let me down..facts! facts! what are facts put an opinion in the hand of a money fisted mannipulator?the line between opinion and fact goes in one nostril and out the other..like the bank of a river, or the admiration of a younger brother.a
|
|
|
|
| Re: Pissing Rant by brazen |
14-Aug-02/12:12 PM |
|
fuck yeah this wins the horus8 AWARD FOR CLOSED FIST BIRTH DAY WISH STAND FAST CAPTAINS MAST award for outstanding achievement in the art of building scarecrows that walk and talk. this is truly a ball of rage 9/10b
|
|
|
|
| Re: of the bad hard drive by david |
14-Aug-02/12:00 PM |
|
that went right over my head, both of them. still.. slightly appealing though. 6/10 (aee you talking to yourself, and is the blue screen the tv pre-porn debauchal?)r
|
|
|
|
| Re: Thorns by poetandknowit |
14-Aug-02/11:57 AM |
|
parents can be real scary in the middle of the night...especially when you catch them humping and you've been drinking and you wanna hit them up for some motel cash and stuff, or a later curfew..this is my fave thus far of yours cuz it forced me to relive the experience and it has plenty of inuendos.............gaffle.jets.towelhead.rubble.poppy-plant.pashtun! (just an exercise of mine nothing to do with you or your poem) 7/101
|
|
|
|
| Re: Salt by <~> |
14-Aug-02/11:45 AM |
|
morning z...the ending is a leaning crucifix of young sailors tormented by salt peter and morning wood wet dreams, plus the structure makes it go in lots of different directions..lots of stuff happening here...treasure chest tawny flesh, grandma lovers it!
|
|
|
|
| Re: Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8 |
14-Aug-02/12:55 AM |
|
i guess..sleep well poetess.b
|
|
|
|
| Re: Stray by Corey McHattan |
14-Aug-02/12:51 AM |
|
bast agrees..8/10 prose are best horse radished and chewed well.
|
|
|
|
| Re: silence of the sky by david |
14-Aug-02/12:49 AM |
|
david who? just joshing..big strange comparisons make my head swim with sharks. i like humus though..7/10-
|
|
|
|
| Re: Fly Paper by ObiWonKn |
14-Aug-02/12:42 AM |
|
foggy shifty pity..neon halos read "late night mouse trap saves turn coat" i hate angels..they are mute 5/10
|
|
|
|
| Re: Potential Tragedy by [mojo] |
14-Aug-02/12:40 AM |
|
this wins the horus8 RIDDLE HE COULDN'T FIGURE OUT AWARD..wow..this is some heavy shit..or is light..is it salt water..mold..silver..a gun powder ingredient..black ice, fuck..you're going to drive me fucking nuts..WAKE UP TELL ME..please.....10/10 you're mojo could wake up morisson..
|
|
|
|
| Re: My Heart's Not Built Like That by Owner of the Sky |
14-Aug-02/12:35 AM |
|
cool name.unique style.three act play.you do own the sky. <this vote brought to you by datura the true potion of invisibility, recomended by shamans world round, and zipless the pants that control your bladder> i love this piece i will hang it on my wall..it wins the horus8 PRIZE FOR HOW TO DO IT RIGHT WITH YOUR LEFT award for late night readers..killere
|
|
|
|
| Re: The Stranger from Mars by venusdemilo |
14-Aug-02/12:20 AM |
|
the beautiful nomad has marked your humble abode i see..he is well..i'm glad you are too..goodnight. read stranger from a strange land. robert heinlen(probably mispelled last name) you'll love it. i know this feeling from both sides.... topple.henry.kissinger.doily. 7/10???
|
|
|
|
| Re: Stop Staring by forestchild7 |
13-Aug-02/9:26 PM |
|
yes...i agree..but they never have anything better to do. get em!e
|
|
|
|
| Re: The Darkness of Eternity by forestchild7 |
13-Aug-02/9:11 PM |
|
that's why they call it spring cleaning..p
|
|
|
|
| Re: hurt by yOum|n |
13-Aug-02/9:09 PM |
|
|
|
| Re: Nude Limbo by forestchild7 |
13-Aug-02/8:57 PM |
|
the choices are limitless and mind-boggling indeedy..6/10 r
|
|
|
|
