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Fly Paper (Free verse) by ObiWonKn Flying inside the wind,
Never losing course
It knows exactly where it's
going
even when the lights go out
It has no eyes to see,
but somehow
knows the way
A trail which it has composed,
in collaboration with
supernatural winds,
is where the angel finds the lost souls
and
elaborates on its utter clarity
Up the ladder:
Remembering Joy
Down the ladder:
The ballad of woosie
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.128089 Overall Rank: 5602 Comments:
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Not sure I've "got" this poem, but I like where it takes me. I'd like to see this as part of a series, perhaps. Doesn't seem to fit with "Clown" in theme, though tone is similar.
foggy shifty pity..neon halos read "late night mouse trap saves turn coat" i hate angels..they are mute 5/10
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