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Fly Paper (Free verse) by ObiWonKn

Flying inside the wind, Never losing course It knows exactly where it's going even when the lights go out It has no eyes to see, but somehow knows the way A trail which it has composed, in collaboration with supernatural winds, is where the angel finds the lost souls and elaborates on its utter clarity

markb 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
Not sure I've "got" this poem, but I like where it takes me. I'd like to see this as part of a series, perhaps. Doesn't seem to fit with "Clown" in theme, though tone is similar.




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