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Nude Limbo (Free verse) by forestchild7
Nude I sit, as if in a limbo, wondering if my lover is coming, and if not, then what shall I do in this state? The state of nudity and the pleasure of it... ***Written April 15th, 2002***
Up the ladder: Thinkin!
Down the ladder: dorm life
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9640
Posted: August 13, 2002 7:14 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 7:14 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 13-Aug-02/8:27 PM | Reply
The first two lines of this are genius. Actually the whole thing could be genius if only you had made the pleasure of nudity more sinister and unthinkable.
[n/a] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 13-Aug-02/8:32 PM | Reply
you wrote it april 15th? i guess if you're wonder what to do with yourself, in case your lover's a no-show, you could always do your taxes...
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Aug-02/8:57 PM | Reply
the choices are limitless and mind-boggling indeedy..6/10 r
[5] FadedHappiness @ 216.76.238.180 | 25-Aug-04/4:32 AM | Reply
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