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Nude Limbo

by forestchild7

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

Nude I sit, as if in a limbo, wondering if my lover is coming, and if not, then what shall I do in this state? The state of nudity and the pleasure of it... ***Written April 15th, 2002***

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Aug-02/8:27 PM Reply
The first two lines of this are genius. Actually the whole thing could be genius if only you had made the pleasure of nudity more sinister and unthinkable.
[n/a] <~> 13-Aug-02/8:32 PM Reply
you wrote it april 15th? i guess if you're wonder what to do with yourself, in case your lover's a no-show, you could always do your taxes...
[6] horus8 13-Aug-02/8:57 PM Reply
the choices are limitless and mind-boggling indeedy..6/10 r
[5] FadedHappiness 25-Aug-04/4:32 AM Reply
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