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Nude Limbo (Free verse) by forestchild7 Nude I sit,
as if in a limbo,
wondering if my lover is coming,
and if not,
then what shall I do in this state?
The state of nudity and the pleasure of it...
***Written April 15th, 2002***
Up the ladder:
Thinkin!
Down the ladder:
dorm life
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Posted: August 13, 2002 7:14 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 7:14 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9103527 Overall Rank: 9646 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
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13-Aug-02/8:27 PM
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The first two lines of this are genius. Actually the whole thing could be genius if only you had made the pleasure of nudity more sinister and unthinkable.
you wrote it april 15th? i guess if you're wonder what to do with yourself, in case your lover's a no-show, you could always do your taxes...
the choices are limitless and mind-boggling indeedy..6/10 r
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