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Nude Limbo (Free verse) by forestchild7

Nude I sit, as if in a limbo, wondering if my lover is coming, and if not, then what shall I do in this state? The state of nudity and the pleasure of it... ***Written April 15th, 2002***

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Aug-02/8:27 PM
The first two lines of this are genius. Actually the whole thing could be genius if only you had made the pleasure of nudity more sinister and unthinkable.




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