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dorm life (Free verse) by balthazar
<<i had my first french kiss last night (just a dare, not for real). is it weird that it was a girl? i'm not a lesbian, it was just a dare.>>

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Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9641
Posted: August 16, 2002 11:23 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 11:23 AM PDT
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[9] pitchblackdisaster @ 195.92.194.16 | 16-Aug-02/11:29 AM | Reply
verry surprizin and yet somewhat brilliant i like it but i dont get where the title came from
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 16-Aug-02/12:42 PM | Reply
What, in College?! You, sir, are a scoundrel and a mountebank! I suggest that you pack up your things and leave at once. As for the poeme, my opinion is that there are far, far too many 'young women' who think that a) faux-kissing another young woman for a dare is sexy, b) that it is original, c) that it is at all daring, d) that it is meaningful, and e) there isn't an e), because a) to d) were so great. It is not weird. Just depressing. But hey, that's just my opinion! Have a good one!
[n/a] deleted user @ | 16-Aug-02/12:54 PM | Reply
i could not agree more, with your a - d. but you have to admit, it has it's appeal (not my poem!).
[7] SoulSlippedAway @ 65.64.26.2 | 23-Aug-02/7:31 PM | Reply
Thank you for the compliment
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