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C Words (Free verse) by RWAndersen
C Words My CONCERN (an uneasy state of blended interest, uncertainty and apprehension) for what you were going through Friday night, Sure CONFOUNDS (to fail to discern Differences between: mix up) Me at what you heard in Saturday's light. You CONSTRUE (to understand or explain the sense or intention of) My words all wrong, want me out of your sight, And CONDEMN (to declare to be reprehensible, wrong or evil without reservation) what we've shared, say I'm not your shining Knight. To CONCLUDE (to bring to an end in a particular way or with a particular action) we're through, casts a shadow on something bright. Don't CONFUSE (to fail to differentiate from an often similar or related other) how I feel with what you think can't be right. If CONCEIT (excessive appreciation of One's own worth or virtue) Is what you think, we're wrong and I won't fight. The CONSTANT (marked by steadfast revolution Or faithfulness; exhibiting constancy of mind or attachment) Is since you came in, my life's reached new heights.

Up the ladder: dorm life
Down the ladder: "On My Love"

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9642
Posted: August 16, 2002 2:05 PM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 2:05 PM PDT
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Comments:
[2] poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.155 | 16-Aug-02/7:06 PM | Reply
This starts out weak and just slowly keeps falling apart.
[7] anagram @ 195.92.168.172 | 16-Aug-02/7:47 PM | Reply
Can't concur, considered clever.Clearly capable creator.Continue contributing.
[9] sliver @ 63.189.16.35 | 6-Nov-03/4:18 PM | Reply
I like the way you did this. It came out well.
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