poemranker ::Pissing Rant by brazen

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Free verse № 8859

Pissing Rant

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Aug 2002 · 6 comments

Anger rising out of diligent mind, Frustrated dimensia overriden this time, Suffocating on the blood from those I've yet to kill, Boiling hotter each day they grow, To only crack open a skull, And remove the useless plot of plans, Crush it, Eat it, Send it to their fucking mother, Show her the stupidity that she grew. Fuck off you fucking pirate, Sail away to escape my violence, Punish you for every mistake, Shit in your mouth and cut open your face. Choking on the distilled air, I thank God that he gave me fists in a pair, So I send you down a with malignant thrust, Eat your skin to secure my lust, Now hang your head in shame, As I hang you from your mane, Above your bedroom floor in plain view, Charge five dollars to see what I made of you. Fuck off to those who proved me right, Middle finger suppository to truth, Stabbed your heart, Kicked you out, Slit your throat without a bout, Killed your inner ugly child, Let your flabby skin fall to death, Blame you for mess your lies have left.

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[9] horus8 14-Aug-02/12:12 PM Reply
fuck yeah this wins the horus8 AWARD FOR CLOSED FIST BIRTH DAY WISH STAND FAST CAPTAINS MAST award for outstanding achievement in the art of building scarecrows that walk and talk. this is truly a ball of rage 9/10b
[n/a] brazen 15-Aug-02/9:07 AM Reply
most of my poems are just one act...i build up the need for a release and just start writing about what is troubling or exciting me until i run out of words...they are a combined long running history (long being the last 7 years)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Aug-02/12:32 PM Reply
"Fuck off you fucking pirate" wins the First Annual -=Dark_Angel=- Award for Outstanding Achievement in the Field of Excellence (the other guy who nearly won it failed to confirm certain details). horus8, think of your own imaginary vessel of praise that isn't an award, you fagin.
[1] yoda's aprentice 24-Aug-02/2:13 PM Reply
this just plain sucks
[n/a] brazen 24-Aug-02/7:34 PM Reply
ok.
[7] PawnedTidal 15-Sep-02/11:02 AM Reply
Wow, that's... angry. But effective.