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Pissing Rant (Free verse) by brazen

Anger rising out of diligent mind, Frustrated dimensia overriden this time, Suffocating on the blood from those I've yet to kill, Boiling hotter each day they grow, To only crack open a skull, And remove the useless plot of plans, Crush it, Eat it, Send it to their fucking mother, Show her the stupidity that she grew. Fuck off you fucking pirate, Sail away to escape my violence, Punish you for every mistake, Shit in your mouth and cut open your face. Choking on the distilled air, I thank God that he gave me fists in a pair, So I send you down a with malignant thrust, Eat your skin to secure my lust, Now hang your head in shame, As I hang you from your mane, Above your bedroom floor in plain view, Charge five dollars to see what I made of you. Fuck off to those who proved me right, Middle finger suppository to truth, Stabbed your heart, Kicked you out, Slit your throat without a bout, Killed your inner ugly child, Let your flabby skin fall to death, Blame you for mess your lies have left.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Aug-02/12:32 PM
"Fuck off you fucking pirate" wins the First Annual -=Dark_Angel=- Award for Outstanding Achievement in the Field of Excellence (the other guy who nearly won it failed to confirm certain details). horus8, think of your own imaginary vessel of praise that isn't an award, you fagin.




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