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of the bad hard drive (Haiku) by david
The Blue Screen of Death. I run from the room, screaming. "I can't do that, Dave."

Up the ladder: Note 2 Myself
Down the ladder: i saw

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11699
Posted: August 13, 2002 11:39 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 11:39 PM PDT
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[4] Tarquin De La Bog @ 213.1.45.14 | 14-Aug-02/2:32 AM | Reply
Smacks of Tron to me. 4. Still, there's something there...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 14-Aug-02/4:12 AM | Reply
What do you mean, "smacks of Tron?" It's practically an explicit reference to 2001. Isn't it?
[n/a] david @ 66.183.25.241 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 4-Jul-03/12:54 PM | Reply
It is, yes. I'm surprised; I thought it would be fairly obvious. It's interesting to hear the other interpretations, though.
[9] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 14-Aug-02/6:42 AM | Reply
"this sort of thing has cropped up before and it has always been due to human error."
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Aug-02/12:00 PM | Reply
that went right over my head, both of them. still.. slightly appealing though. 6/10 (aee you talking to yourself, and is the blue screen the tv pre-porn debauchal?)r
[9] Venus @ 198.81.17.32 | 14-Aug-02/3:59 PM | Reply
COMPUTER MALFUNCTION, LIFE FUNCTIONS CRITICAL, LIFE FUNCTIONS TERMINATED. The blue screen is threatening the evolution of humanity! "Dave, my mind is going. I can feel it. I can feel it. My mind is going. There is no question about it." Goodbye, HAL.
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Jul-03/1:52 PM | Reply
lol.
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