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i saw (Free verse) by comdot
I saw a flower
out in the snow
From where did it come
why does it grow?
It's color so bright
It's petals so grand
What does it mean?
Wish I could understand
Not one other living thing around it
as it growns on the hill
I sit huddles and watching it
as the wind blows still
Admiring it's beauty
as it stands alone
in a sea of white
Wish I could stay longer
but it's turning night
Do I dare pluck it?
or just let it be?
I left and returned in the morning
But the flower was gone
Not even a foot print
in sight
Where I'd viewn it there
I stood looking without expression
just a blank stare
At where it stood so serenly
showing the beauty I saw
This perfect flower
withouth a single flaw
no snow had fallen
but somehow in the night
This flower from above
had taken a flight
I cherish the vision
thats imprinted in my mind
And hopes for the day
another flower I'll find
Growing all alone
on some hill in the snow
Where I know it's impossible
for such a flower to grow
for this time I'd dig it up
give it my love and care
and forever have the flower
for my life to share
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.75
Overall Rank: 11705
Posted: September 19, 2002 7:14 AM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 7:14 AM PDT
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