poemranker ::Anguish by IndianEyes

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Free verse № 23495

Anguish

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

Why do you always flip, and shout and scream and fight? Can't you see your scaring me? I cower low with fright. A tear escapes me eye, I wipe it hard away. I'll never show my sorrow, deep down it'll always stay. Why so quick to loose your temper? Is it always because of me? I try so hard, but somehow, I can never escape this misery. Why is something always wrong? Why can't it ever be right? Why the constant arguments, with rage as you fight? A river of tears flow when i'm alone, the sun is down the lights are low. Can anyone see my pain, can anyone see my grief? I'm bleeding inside, I no longer want to live. You always fight and sream and shout, your pushing me away. I want to up and leave, but somehow I always stay...

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[7] t_t_redhot 3-Nov-02/9:10 PM Reply
very well writen. sounds like my home life.