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Anguish (Free verse) by IndianEyes

Why do you always flip, and shout and scream and fight? Can't you see your scaring me? I cower low with fright. A tear escapes me eye, I wipe it hard away. I'll never show my sorrow, deep down it'll always stay. Why so quick to loose your temper? Is it always because of me? I try so hard, but somehow, I can never escape this misery. Why is something always wrong? Why can't it ever be right? Why the constant arguments, with rage as you fight? A river of tears flow when i'm alone, the sun is down the lights are low. Can anyone see my pain, can anyone see my grief? I'm bleeding inside, I no longer want to live. You always fight and sream and shout, your pushing me away. I want to up and leave, but somehow I always stay...

t_t_redhot 3-Nov-02/9:10 PM
very well writen. sounds like my home life.




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