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i saw (Free verse) by comdot

I saw a flower out in the snow From where did it come why does it grow? It's color so bright It's petals so grand What does it mean? Wish I could understand Not one other living thing around it as it growns on the hill I sit huddles and watching it as the wind blows still Admiring it's beauty as it stands alone in a sea of white Wish I could stay longer but it's turning night Do I dare pluck it? or just let it be? I left and returned in the morning But the flower was gone Not even a foot print in sight Where I'd viewn it there I stood looking without expression just a blank stare At where it stood so serenly showing the beauty I saw This perfect flower withouth a single flaw no snow had fallen but somehow in the night This flower from above had taken a flight I cherish the vision thats imprinted in my mind And hopes for the day another flower I'll find Growing all alone on some hill in the snow Where I know it's impossible for such a flower to grow for this time I'd dig it up give it my love and care and forever have the flower for my life to share

<~> 19-Sep-02/10:52 AM
and in doing so, destroy it...acony bell




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