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Salt (Free verse) by <~>
Water
to wash away the stain of mundane.
Lick
my wounds, surging surf
And pepper
me with ablutive spray.
Of the earth,
I am bound to what is
Mine.
My blood swells; I curse
Flat
out lies from his lips
And vinegar
now in his kiss
Pass the
man over, he is not worth
It,
taking that risk.
Pan
him, can him: don't go astray.
Preserve
yourself from the hurt
Cellared
in my spirit. Stay away.
Shaker,
mover, faker, loser--you poured it
In my wounds,
blinded me with lies,
Petered
me away. I have come to despise
All these lines.
I am done with you, done with it.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.733333
Weighted score: 6.526715
Overall Rank: 662
Posted: August 14, 2002 7:01 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 9:04 AM PDT
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