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Stop Staring (Free verse) by forestchild7 Frozen in motion,
as if the world has stopped,
and I notice that even I am stuck...
Wherever I look,
I realize that this is no longer Utopia,
and that the frozen icicles are bearing down on me...
The pressure is mounting,
and the day is dawning,
and I wonder what will happen next...
So please stop staring at me...
***Written January 8th, 2002***
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Posted: August 13, 2002 7:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 7:42 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8912 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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13-Aug-02/9:26 PM
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yes...i agree..but they never have anything better to do. get em!e
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