Re: a comment on Icarus Down by horus8	16-Dec-02/3:27 PM
i thought you were a deformed black smith with an eye for forging???
Re: a comment on Icarus Down by horus8	16-Dec-02/3:23 PM
could you be more specific, and i'll try to see what your seeing. As far as inane dogshit goes.. insane dogshit i guess works harder for the people.a
Re: a comment on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT	15-Dec-02/10:18 PM
are you out of your mind! i was kidding, i see what patti meant by calling you gullible. no sweat. i'm worse trust me...okay.. i see your structure, now they are built that way to either contrast one another (the stanzas) and then resolve, or go from birth to sudden unexpected death (in story sense) example; While shopping the store beware of the poor That are clipping tags under rags For if you can't I'm sure you shan't Put your clothes with wynona's bags (just kidding lol) Find their clothes in one of your bags or stuff your clothes in one of their bags..it's endless and you can mix it up for days! you can start a series.
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub	15-Dec-02/9:48 PM
choice read.
Re: a comment on Icarus up by horus8	15-Dec-02/9:29 PM
what you deem worthy? exactly my point. all you can do is drag my friends, and my son around like achilles dragging hector? someone other than me to raise my son? yeah maybe someone true and proud and real like you? a real fucking eagle scout. Boy? i would be picking through your bones while you were still wondering what had just happened to your brave and worthless machismo soaked stance if god forbid i even accidentally bumped into you, unlike you i'm better with my hands than a pen. also....highschool? i walked out..not dropped out. i'd rather let the real scholars like yourself wear dresses and throw hats and take pictures..oh by the way sorry about your mom you ever think that she might of just got.. well sick of listening to your worthless fucking pie hole, talk about your worthless fucking pie hole?, and just dropped the fuck dead? don't worry your cancer haikus are proof enough to me that your a mommas boy guilty of sucking the tit a little too hard to long. have a cold one on me. you deserve it along with a hug and perhaps a raise. hey i know sell your sperm to women who's husbands have died of cancer..than we can all keep the dream alive. your dream alive. you are a true american, and every fucking reason why every un-american should move here to take after your fine example of breathing, and writing, and all of those other things you do so well...waste everyones fucking time while repeatedly telling them they're wasting yours...take a look around funny boy..we are at my poem not yours, so who goes out of their way to be all that they can be..you do..now be a good tall handsome, strong, intelligent true lover poet, and go fuck your dead mother, my son, my girlfriend, and boston market, your important government job, your latin american experience, and your i'm so damn bright i've never seen a t.v show attitude over to your poem area to rub on it all..cuz i'm just getting started you fucking bird legged, pigeon chested shite smearer you have the heart of a canary and the loyalty of a guinnea pig, you'll go to whoever feeds you the most ass licking. your type always does. which coincidentally, is why we lost both campaigns in asia..real smart tough guys like you.and as for gw she's better off you're full of shit anyway. merry christmas poser.
Re: Mother by blkarak	15-Dec-02/2:26 PM
never..it's only just begun. GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD FOR MOTHER'S SQUATTING EVERYWHERE YOUR NEGLECT WILL BE MET WITH A RAZOR SIDED FRISBEE. if only birth control had worked to begin with i still could be backstroking with the porpoises on planet gt-21. have a 10. for making my laugh.N
Re: Death's Awaiting by The_Shadows_Smile	14-Dec-02/7:09 PM
change choas to choad.
Re: Roll the dice (revised) by Katie	14-Dec-02/4:40 PM
i too, want to thank you miggy, for helping me, help myself. i can date again without anti-venom.
Re: BITTER AND TWISTED by HANCEKW	14-Dec-02/4:32 PM
pretty much 75% of all american children born between 1970 and 1995. there's always the game show channel.
Re: it was red by kiki	14-Dec-02/4:26 PM
also very well controled. the sense of restraint and it leaves the reader with a feeling of an involved evolution with the author.e
Re: the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki	14-Dec-02/4:01 PM
i believe this poem to be flattering and quite accurate, it wins A GOLDEN Q TIP AWARD FOR REMINDING ME..WELL OF ME. NOT THAT THAT'S HARD TO DO, BUT IMPOSSIBLE AT THIS POINT IN TIME enjoy...10!T
Re: opposition by kiki	14-Dec-02/3:56 PM
when i was younger the rats ate my board game collection.;
Re: No name. by Plasticgirlwithgun	13-Dec-02/10:17 PM
i want you to know that when i give her a good shove...well..i think of you. every time actually.v
Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait	12-Dec-02/12:44 PM
the angels must die whether they are angels of fit or fate...lit or lite. they must BURN!!r
Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait	12-Dec-02/12:41 PM
HA! ^%^^&$^&(*^ HA! ARGHHHHH!
Re: a comment on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus	12-Dec-02/12:54 AM
james clavell. sho gun.
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub	12-Dec-02/12:36 AM
sorry friend, not only could i and can i out drink you in the most severest of ways, but i would do it while holding your quill between my teeth and chandolier swinging the hula team. i'm younger with less restraints, and i unlike you have a sense of humor, than again "this is not the first time you tried to get away....if we get the room one more night...this is not a horse race were winners beat the time..this is not a funeral with mourners in a line...this is not a party where people know your name...this is not a classroom with teacher at the board. this is not a atilla with his mighty hoarde GO! DON'T YOU GOOOO OH OH! WONT YOU STAY WITH ME ONE MORE DAY... if we get the room one more night"
Re: a comment on alienheart by Bill Z Bub	12-Dec-02/12:25 AM
could you possibly be more suspicious?
Re: Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent" by bondjedi	11-Dec-02/7:40 PM
thank god the title isn't better than the haiku, and i thought he did already. they shold have a mutton burger called the mcbleet. the second line is humorous. what kind of vreature is the grimace? exactly.r
Re: A hard life by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/7:34 PM
possibly, holding more meaning than an incubus song.d