on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 5:15 PM
lo and behold, yet again, by confessing children, but the same time not really confessing you achieve the unachievable. 24 tens, from a place where apparently the confessional works by not actually working. hooray. i'm impressed.
on father Worked Nights by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:53 PM
is it...could it be?...no it couldn't!, but yes..once again 'not confessionally confessional poetry', by none other than..? you got it mr. poetry. not just any normal poem boys and girls but a riveting american staple that you to can purchase at wallmart in the form of a taxidermied mallard with a brass enscribed plaque. thanks uncle charlie! i'll put it right next to the rocket i built last week...say,,will you fire her off with my at the play ground this afternoon uncle charlie..that'd be swell.l
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:45 PM
secondly,the biggest confessional of all time...here i'm leaving this fruit cake for the holidays at your altar..it's my aunts recipe.one dash miles bettween us, a sprinkle of endless sea..steeped in the sun for a week with a pinch of photograph in wallet. vuala 'disinfranchised confessional poetry that's not confessional but still true with just a tinge of metaphorical middle america dustings <the babbit special> enjoy children it goes with coffee and scones along with carolers and snow drifts.t
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
11 Dec 2002, 4:37 PM
first off, it's too ummm confessional.
on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Dec 2002, 2:55 PM
i'll put your opinion right next to my guitar pick collection. To be lost in the dulling colors and teeth marks. here let me help you out, i'll give myself a zero and take your critic to my eyebrows like a straight-razor cuz that's how fucking much i care about what you think mr. poetry.
on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
10 Dec 2002, 9:44 PM
stop at winter air, than say open my shutters for the sun.also, try to compromise the integrity of some of your adjectives...think neutral but crisp and light like foil, a taoist with telepathic abilities.t
on just plain orange by New Life Drug
10 Dec 2002, 8:50 PM
i miss orange juilius' somethin fierce and a double double with cheese (monster style) with grilled onions...like, to go with dude. big time.l
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
10 Dec 2002, 8:35 PM
my girlfriend works at boston market.
i'm inbetween jobs
p__r___a i think? (god's wife) is doing in home nursing now, and some other freelance activities (she's not my sister she's one of my dear friends and my son's godmother, she helped raise me).
so, i don't quite get your taco bell reference, (perhaps that's your attempt at humor, because i'm part columbian and she's part equadorian?) but i don't quite get you either, so what the hell.
also, have you ever had a mexican pizza at three in the morning drunk on coors and jaegermeister? that's what i thought amigo. the next time you go to the 'bell' think, and know, there is a loogie in your mt. dew. from you know who. kid chicky chaw.m
i'm inbetween jobs
p__r___a i think? (god's wife) is doing in home nursing now, and some other freelance activities (she's not my sister she's one of my dear friends and my son's godmother, she helped raise me).
so, i don't quite get your taco bell reference, (perhaps that's your attempt at humor, because i'm part columbian and she's part equadorian?) but i don't quite get you either, so what the hell.
also, have you ever had a mexican pizza at three in the morning drunk on coors and jaegermeister? that's what i thought amigo. the next time you go to the 'bell' think, and know, there is a loogie in your mt. dew. from you know who. kid chicky chaw.m
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 6:48 PM
don't be afraid to suck the laST sentence into the last stanza it fits fine. no osterization needed..
on en el tiempo que era nina by daniella
10 Dec 2002, 6:14 PM
i have to agree wth d.a and gw (we were giggling about it while she was at my house just now) on this one, both of your attempts at spanish are umm well, whatever. better luck next time. have an eight for christmas.e
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
10 Dec 2002, 6:03 PM
just because my sister comes over and uses my computer does not mean i'm menstruating. i hope you know we're not the same people.
my audition went well today. i might just be a dr. yet. ha! ha!
my audition went well today. i might just be a dr. yet. ha! ha!
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
10 Dec 2002, 12:14 PM
bastard! enjoy the organic mutton. have a safe flight.
on uninvited guests by teacup
10 Dec 2002, 12:01 PM
sweet water melon seeds they're everywhere!e
on Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense...
10 Dec 2002, 11:58 AM
nifty.i