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Icarus up (Haiku) by horus8 Young man, old man, maze.
Why not death by Minotaur?
You get wings instead.
I love you father.
You tied a string to an ant.
Sent it through a shell.
Up the ladder:
The Land of Back-to-Front
Down the ladder:
Raw boy chiva
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Posted: December 14, 2002 7:42 PM PST; Last modified: March 13, 2003 1:46 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.1 Overall Rank: 1137 Comments:
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vulcan @ 213.29.102.17
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15-Dec-02/6:51 AM
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what a pleasure it was Sir to read it!it makes one feel better!10
This is fucking like visionary, man.
aren't you missing t.j hooker or something?
I have no idea what you are talking about. Sorry. For someone who claims to be so bright without any education past the 10th grade you sure make little sense most of the time.
i never claimed to be bright. you're the fuck waiving around your taxes and diplomas you fucking unsavory mugwump. i already told you fifteen times "that the bio on the website was invented". get it? made up. a character...make believe..how can i put this? a fucking lie..horus8..is a made up poet figure that i created like ziggy stardust? do you fucking get it now...do you really think a person could raise a family in the town that i live in with no job and a 10th grade education? my rent alone is four car payments not to mention my two car payments (hold on for a sec, my other line, okay) that said...what else do a want, need, desire..perhaps some endust for your diplomas? some more lies that you can try to use against me (hold on real quick while i take this hard fat cock out of my mouth and put it in my tight pink ass) just let me know, i'm on your team cassanova.
And I am not on your team.
i think i already said that.
"Fact or fiction, it is all the same to me;" All fun aside, What?!."I am adjunct faculty that fills the university's needs in the International Studies program regarding Latin America." no wonder you write such cutting edge poetry, you're an overpaid government librarian, i've never met one of them..."look earl he's got arms, legs and two eyes too, and see how attentive this one is he's real aware and quick upstairs..so you sell an american citizens opinon based on 'facts' about latin america to america for america to do what...teach young americans how culturaly aware of their neighbors down south they can be. or to show latin americans just how much we respect them. you don't even know who fucking t.j hooker is for the love of god, and shouldn't they hire a latin american to teach americans about latin america, or better yet how about an eskimo to teach me about africans. or a jew to teach me just what the fuck is wrong with arabs. it's all getting clearer for me, how about you? oh tennis? also for pussies, who wear sweat bands and drive saabs.
You are right an "overpaid government librarian", except that it is a private university. But other than that, right. and all your logic here is correct. I shouldn't be teaching it, becasue really I do not know what I am talking about. Yes, you guessed it. I drive a saab and am exceptionally overweight. that is why I hit the courts at least once a week. I am sorry hours8. you are right. I am a pussy.
This is my problem with you. i truly think you are occasionally a brilliant writer, but they are a dime a dozen and boring as fuck as of late. i appologize for dragging your mother into the boston market, children, girlfriend, god's wife, whatever other absolute pointless dribble bullshit you had to add to the mix, oh yeah dick sucking. (a persons art does not always represent the way they live) but you insisted as always in straying from the core of truth of the matter, that poem was shit, and i'm not even saying that i haven't been known to step in shit myself, but i can differentiate between shit, funny shit, good shit, and pure shit, and that my friend was shit...now if you want to see pure shit go to number one in both the best and worst catagories and click. enjoy. (locke, or stan rice hmmm.) stan rice any day, why you might ask, because i'm not above it, i'm underneath it. maybe you should try to dumb it down sometimes too..it will ease facial tensions and sour gut, oh right after i read some locke i'll have a locke with tomatoes and onions, and read some wolfe. what a crock, you, telling me, to read more. why don't you move to Venezuela and preach your theories on reading down there oil slave.
Yes, master horusJH, you are correct and sorry to hear the Taos trip was all conjured. I quite enjoy the spirit of the festival. It is very dumbing down, as you like to call it. I suppose I will have to watch more ice hockey. Anyway, please refer all further references to my last comment in your favorite Katie poem, to the last rant of yours. And please continue with trashing my dead mother or what other you want to drag out into the open. I have nothing to hide. I have no feelings. So fuck you clueless wonder.
Hmmm. I gues the poem was deleted and along with it the comment where you referred to yourself as a human with feelings that were being hurt. Which I thought odd considering everything you say seems to reflect something of a character. But at that point because I never intended to hurt your feelings I conceded. so you win, because if this continues you will get hurt. I won't. It is that simple. So enjoy the four car payment pad and the Hollywood life. Because you are on the cultural edge of dumbing down. Kiss the boy and 22 year old tart and have a toaster strudel you visionary genius you.. I hope to see you in Passions one day. Good luck.
when i refer to feelings on any level i'm being sarcastic. don't concede on my behalf mr. poetry go back and read..nothings been deleted..and passions? you are a fucking sick man, for insinuating the sheer irony of it all..i searched..i went..i have lost all feeling in my extremities..i choose death by stereo. thanks here you try asshole...http://www.geocities.com/aimee
I disagree. I do not think you are, because beneath it all I think you are the real pussy you speak of (oh mighty hollywood boy with the kung fu knowledge). You know it is funny, when people cannot win a talk with Sun-Tzu the resort to violence. I guess it falls into the "i can out drink you" mentality you have shown earlier. In this case, becasue you are an run of the mill (at best) writer, no matter how you put it (oh, woe, I am a visionary ahead of my time), the fact is your writing is quite that: average. Maybe it is becase you read Stan Rice. hahahahahahahahah! No wait. hahahahahahahaha. I cannot belive you are actually serious and tell people to read that shit. No wonder you need someone of my stature to tell you what to read. Obviously, you girlie cannot challenge you to think. I mean working at Boston Chicken may pay the preschool but what does it do for the mental capacity. did you knock her up when you she was 19. So horny when you got out of the brig and went on the road. Does the think you are a star...hahahahaha hahahaha Stan Rice. You have a chip on your shoulder the size of Miami. Have you thought of completing your GED. That would make your mama proud. And then maybe you could find a woman more your age. One that could challenge you to think. Your whole world is what you watch on TV. And yes, I removed comments becasue you were crying, weeping as a good man should. Plus, you are an idiot, so why waste my time with you and GW. You are ultimate goofs. I would rather spar with someone 1) i respect, 2) that has above a 10th grade education (good will hunting was a movie) 3) is not clueless, and 4) that does not read stan rice and frequent fast food restaurant for the sake of paying rent that is worth 4 (yes, folks 4) car payments. What for a Neon? That comes to about USD700 a month. Not bad at all. Actually mighty cheap.
no she doesn't think i'm anything more or less than what i am. there is nothing wrong with stan rice's poetry..i think it's genuine anf true to form. She works at Boston Market, and makes 8.00$ an hour as a cashier, and is the most honest and giving human being i ever met, and without even writing a poem she is already a better poet than you..innocent and magical from her soul to her skin, she was eighteen when we met barely. I don't get horny i'm a dominant submissive i get even. the chip on my shoulder is actually the size of your wifes fat ass and all the massive brain power in taos put together in bombastic technicolor through old man baggy eyed spoken poetry contests. let's see what else? i am capable of doing 100's of things at once so your right about t.v, movies, current events, music, literature, and much much more starsky. it's not a fast food restaurant it's a market/medium food establishment. my rent is 1565.00 monthly, you can figure out the car brand that equates too on your own, but i would probably say a turbo neon. clueless, that is deep, you are deep..much deeper than stan rice or locke your deep like crude oil...no it wasn't sarcasm.it was trauma look at me crying..crying i tell you..crying out for a verb to better isolate your inner vastness and clarity your, enlightenment, but fuck that. i have a diploma from the commonwealth of Virginia. Spar? with what your superior verbage? i am no hard up housewife mr. lips that shit wont cut it with me. by the way the four car payment thing was just bait to prove once again how a drowning man will grab anything and anyone they can to survive if i told you my cock was actually a rainbow would you follow it?. stick around i'll give you even more ammo..how do you like them apples? does it frighten you someone with enough curiosity about life could educate themselves in a public library in such a way, as to make the truly gifted as yourself look puffed. naw. some do it for free, some do it for their parents hard earned pennies, but you, you did it for mum..what a fine young lad..fit and proper, and no fool, a teacher folks look at him go, a teacher.
hahahahah, You just proved everything I said. And I am drunk even. What a dork. You are truly the idiot of this site. As I said, Before the Boston Chicken, get the GED. Stan Rice. hahahahah. Next you will justify Ann Rice and her son. Vampire visionaries. hahhahahahaha, What a fool. You did not answer me you punk ass amateur attempter of writing poetry. Are you threatening me? hahahahahahhahah
And my wife and her fat ass, hahahahahah, She is a competitive runner - in the vain of GW - hahhahahah.....fat ass. ahahaajhahahah. Do you have even a GED you ignorant dickhead. hahahahahaha. Do you, you high school dropout, I have been in the brig, and popped out a baby with an 18 year old high school girl because that is the level and only the level (something big is coming) I think at. hahahhahah. Come on you fool. Bring it on. I am still young yet. What do you have that could defeat me, besides a stolen turkey. You dip fool. hahhahahahah., Stan Rice.....How profound.......
This was the worst rejoinder ever....
And wow, usd1565. Have you ever considered doing something sensible and buying? Why throw the money away? Is living in Hollywood with that important? Is working fast food that necessary. My house payment while a bit more (if we are throwing these things around) at least I am getting something. And I do not have to live in a place that is as vile as where you live. Come on.
I not in the position of getting ms. Diaz out of my head, however I certain would not throw her out of my bed...Luck with the plucking of the duck and the spinachy stuff...
ah, i see that i was.
hahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I say Icarus down, get him down
Icarus poems ROCK!
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