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Icarus up (Haiku) by horus8

Young man, old man, maze. Why not death by Minotaur? You get wings instead. I love you father. You tied a string to an ant. Sent it through a shell.

poetandknowit 16-Dec-02/6:20 PM
I disagree. I do not think you are, because beneath it all I think you are the real pussy you speak of (oh mighty hollywood boy with the kung fu knowledge). You know it is funny, when people cannot win a talk with Sun-Tzu the resort to violence. I guess it falls into the "i can out drink you" mentality you have shown earlier. In this case, becasue you are an run of the mill (at best) writer, no matter how you put it (oh, woe, I am a visionary ahead of my time), the fact is your writing is quite that: average. Maybe it is becase you read Stan Rice. hahahahahahahahah! No wait. hahahahahahahaha. I cannot belive you are actually serious and tell people to read that shit. No wonder you need someone of my stature to tell you what to read. Obviously, you girlie cannot challenge you to think. I mean working at Boston Chicken may pay the preschool but what does it do for the mental capacity. did you knock her up when you she was 19. So horny when you got out of the brig and went on the road. Does the think you are a star...hahahahaha hahahaha Stan Rice. You have a chip on your shoulder the size of Miami. Have you thought of completing your GED. That would make your mama proud. And then maybe you could find a woman more your age. One that could challenge you to think. Your whole world is what you watch on TV. And yes, I removed comments becasue you were crying, weeping as a good man should. Plus, you are an idiot, so why waste my time with you and GW. You are ultimate goofs. I would rather spar with someone 1) i respect, 2) that has above a 10th grade education (good will hunting was a movie) 3) is not clueless, and 4) that does not read stan rice and frequent fast food restaurant for the sake of paying rent that is worth 4 (yes, folks 4) car payments. What for a Neon? That comes to about USD700 a month. Not bad at all. Actually mighty cheap.




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