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Icarus up (Haiku) by horus8

Young man, old man, maze. Why not death by Minotaur? You get wings instead. I love you father. You tied a string to an ant. Sent it through a shell.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 16-Dec-02/2:19 PM
This is my problem with you. i truly think you are occasionally a brilliant writer, but they are a dime a dozen and boring as fuck as of late. i appologize for dragging your mother into the boston market, children, girlfriend, god's wife, whatever other absolute pointless dribble bullshit you had to add to the mix, oh yeah dick sucking. (a persons art does not always represent the way they live) but you insisted as always in straying from the core of truth of the matter, that poem was shit, and i'm not even saying that i haven't been known to step in shit myself, but i can differentiate between shit, funny shit, good shit, and pure shit, and that my friend was shit...now if you want to see pure shit go to number one in both the best and worst catagories and click. enjoy. (locke, or stan rice hmmm.) stan rice any day, why you might ask, because i'm not above it, i'm underneath it. maybe you should try to dumb it down sometimes too..it will ease facial tensions and sour gut, oh right after i read some locke i'll have a locke with tomatoes and onions, and read some wolfe. what a crock, you, telling me, to read more. why don't you move to Venezuela and preach your theories on reading down there oil slave.




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