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Raw boy chiva (Free verse) by horus8
I
rounded
the corner
in full stride,
pet hawk on my shoulder.
The click of steel boots on the fly
my first victim
was the hobo
i unleashed
my bird un masked, and it
devoured his face.
the next non suspecting
dolt was a salesman,
and my sabre made quick
work of his suit and tie plan.
The next was a plump virgin nun,
"OH WHY SWEET JESUS, DID SHE NEED TO DIE?"
the fourth was a charity case
that i found changing oil
at a Jiffy-Lube
i made him drink his
own coffee black with
no sugar. then wait
for hours
watching bad t.v
and children, with no money
fuck with those candy machines
aeons later
i killed him,
and them too.
Then, as i made
my way to 5th and Broadway
a little girl in a off yellow school
bus waved to me and blew
me a slow pulsing kiss.
she had her uniform on
I smiled
and blew, back one
then popped a mentos
then i went and
shot dope in the alley
most directly
see,
i forget
nothing
but the
best reasons
why.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 6.1
Overall Rank: 1138
Posted: February 7, 2003 1:55 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2003 2:10 PM PST
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