| Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w |
16-Jan-03/9:24 PM |
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Here we have athena..and to think she graduated from northwestern with a degree in graphic design, and a minor in creative writing..Not to creative though kiddo, hence the wanker award (which is veiwed as an accomplishment to the disturbed) so you young poets take this as a lesson..don't wank with other peoples material, because it might wank you back! [therefore she get the motionless 5{even worse than the zero}. next/
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| Re: Another poem by Mutant_X |
16-Jan-03/9:27 PM |
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here once again we have mutant x doing everything but mutating. do not attempt to read this shite at home children..it may cause temporary drooling and tart walking.
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| Re: PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr |
16-Jan-03/9:31 PM |
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Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.
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| Re: Society's Sharades by New Life Drug |
16-Jan-03/9:36 PM |
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Now here we have an interesting young poet with quite the growing body of great work. different, brave..willing to take chances, yet carrying a sweet and well educated grasp of the english language. an a real fine user name..one of poemrankers emerging young poeties of the future <New Life Drug> [like three crickets chirp, and some drunk chick farts in the back row] nevermind them kid horus says to new life..they're kinda slow. 8!
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| Re: Blonded by the Light by w~* ATHENA *~w |
16-Jan-03/9:40 PM |
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She pops up regularly.like those over played pop songs that she hijacked these words from, could be original, could be pilfered..who knows, who dares? 5 for staying alive ah ah ah ah. and the bee gees (which stands for brothers gibb, by the way}k
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| Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
16-Jan-03/9:43 PM |
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yes even occassionally poemranker has station identifications from the emergengy broadcast system..sorry about that. and no. he's not the sheriff, or smokey the bear.he was the airconditioning guy out of freon and drunk, we had to let him go. 0.
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| Re: Turmoil by ThoughtfulSoul |
16-Jan-03/9:45 PM |
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yes we do care! no. we can't do a fucking thing about it..let me no when you got the perp in a line up..i'll come hold your hand..see no kids, you can't give a poet like thoughtful soul a bad score cuz they meant well, so you have to do the 6 thing..you know what i mean?
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| Re: The Sky by jauser |
16-Jan-03/9:48 PM |
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So far this is the winner, don't ask me why, but it's loose and accurate to be sure..not to mention..simple and well written in a complicated fashion...i liked it alot. 10!!
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| Re: Olden by smlink84 |
16-Jan-03/9:51 PM |
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obviously a brilliant poet dumbing down with hard tweaks and over used symbols..this piece was funny, serious and ended fucking out there baby! a great read.
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| Re: Breathless. by Service |
16-Jan-03/9:53 PM |
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wasn't that special. you're classic seven..why ? because you're luckier than us you bastard. a fine balanced poem.
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| Re: Gutless by temptalia |
16-Jan-03/9:55 PM |
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i don't know about you cats, but selling swine, and cocking back steel, gets it for me every fucking time..YEE HAW! 8 a swell read.
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
16-Jan-03/10:07 PM |
Excellent! ladies and gentle men we have been graced this evening with the pride of wales himself...Nicholas Jones..<the crowd of course is completely asleep at this point or in a stupor..not even knowing half way near to where in the fuck wales is [south west england, i believe, capitol, Cardiff, known for steel, coal, welsh cakes..dylanthomas, {still no one moves fat chick farts again and this time giggles} protestants? COME ON PEOPLE! the land of the poets and singers taliesin? Dafydd ap fucking Gwilym the EISTEDDFODD! FOR FUCKS SAKE..three people get up and leave..ah fUCK YOU TOO, SCREAMS BACHUS..come on nick i'll by you a drink, by the way nice poem dude
..do you go to the college of medicine? or saint david? Bachus and nick walk off into the iced over night to find the nearest pub, and a reason to sing anew..
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| Re: Endymion Dead by vulcan |
16-Jan-03/10:08 PM |
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on the way out..they throw vulcan a ten..because his poetry rocks too. yeah..chicky chik chik chaw.?
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| Re: Introduction By Decree by Wulf |
16-Jan-03/10:23 PM |
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pale rider...bitchin..i heard george thorogood straight thru this.g
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Jan-03/9:40 PM |
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| Re: Heartless by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/9:44 PM |
would be better maybe,
"For that is all i have ever been."
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| Re: Yellow! by AuntyM |
18-Jan-03/5:13 PM |
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sounds like a malpractice suit.
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| Re: why? by little_angel_maria |
18-Jan-03/5:15 PM |
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ski jumping is for adults young lady, REPENT IN THE NAME OF JESUS! <body starts to twist and gyrate whilst banging the vulve with the christ doll haaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!> sorry just be moving along now.
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| Re: Confused by planetdicko |
18-Jan-03/5:17 PM |
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try asexuality. it works..that and murdering people..for cash...and writing vilanelles helps too.
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| Re: America by little_angel_maria |
18-Jan-03/5:21 PM |
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No, not according to malthusian theorys.
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