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14-Jan-03/4:58 PM |
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| Re: The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee |
14-Jan-03/5:00 PM |
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| Re: Hidden by tbeach84 |
14-Jan-03/5:07 PM |
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soul banging is always a delightful past time activity..that, and cannulas. lol. ah the turmoil of asexuala. facinating...like learning how to play the tuba in a marching band.
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14-Jan-03/5:29 PM |
"Her crimson scythe of violence" you always make me chuckle uncontrolably
you are a total romantic softy. You must of read this outloud and known these guys were going to tear you up on this piece? It's to big of a target not to.
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker |
15-Jan-03/9:57 AM |
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my favorite part was when his homies just laughed, and when they stole his spleen, but since you already have a lovely zero. let like attract like, and carry you to the worst list.
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15-Jan-03/8:01 PM |
you got this one down on tape yet?
or music written? I would be interested in hearing it.
email me. horus8@netscape.net
i have a studio and i would
consider producing you.
possibly.. for free.
we live in the same area
i believe.
very funny stuff.
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| Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:03 PM |
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Sorry, i've been just missing you lately.9
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15-Jan-03/8:04 PM |
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| Re: strange beds (1989) by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:10 PM |
"
inside my head,
a quick intake of breath
on these
strange beds."
might flow better like
inside of my head,
a quick intake of breath
upon these
strange beds.
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| Re: flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:13 PM |
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Real good!...can dusty be another word though...more...i don't know rare?
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| Re: unsent by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:20 PM |
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the 'slowly' might look more sexy next to the 'that' and there was a speed bump on the tongue somewhere in the middle. lots of fun though! you're a realy clever writer that tis for surely.
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| Re: alienheart by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:27 PM |
"what switch
in our alien hearts
makes us part?"
needs one more word
like 'today'
or jete'
crochet
j-bay
(just kidding on the last one)
or some down beat
otherwise a serious favorite of mine..i realize i've been
giving you votes in this run that will keep you from re-editing,
that's cool, i understand..these poems are really moving and
sculpted, and i don't blame you.
enjoy.
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| Re: route nine by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:29 PM |
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Another favorite of mine. Fucking rad.
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| Re: triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/8:37 PM |
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And there you have it folks! a half an hour with Bill and Horus8, come see us next week, same time, same place....on "LETS COOK WITH SULPHUR" thanks for watching us...coming up next Bachus interviews Nicholas jones in an exlusive behind the scenes conversation with the famous welsh poet. See you there..thanks for tuning into the 'eye of horus' on poemranker's underground channel "Quaker". <brought to you by 'dismal glasses' the only way wear shades and 'fotohut' more than just thatch and 5 by 7 double prints>
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16-Jan-03/2:15 PM |
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We do not have his ass here yet. We are currently in a fierce bidding war with the pigmys on ebay for it intact...could be expensive..currently we are willing to trade it for our rare collection of bathing salts from honduras, but we'll have to wait and see..what the pygmys counter with. the pigmys have rhino horn powdered with lovely moss packed velvet pouches complete with air plants, hip sack and lichens on velvet..so..it's a close call. we can only pray to jesu. i've heard rumors that it's a very lovely bum indeed, and will have bachus ask him for photos to post when he interviews the famous midwest poet early next week (p&k, for the Bachus tribunal).
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| Re: Old Man by keatsImnot |
16-Jan-03/2:41 PM |
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I'm partial to poppies and soldiers, and revolution. Not just because i have the band morphine blaring 11 currently either. nice quick verse here. cut and dry. have a 9.
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16-Jan-03/2:44 PM |
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that's a birdie baby! i can look past the typos 'too'.
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16-Jan-03/4:45 PM |
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Looks good. Is there a google mystery here because the title doesn't ring any immediate bells, but i am horrible with names, and titles, actually...well not totally horrible, but compared to alot of my peers, bad.
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| Re: Untitled by greym0on |
16-Jan-03/7:45 PM |
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| Re: Nothin lasts by Mutant_X |
16-Jan-03/9:20 PM |
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<yes ladies and gentlemen it's time for that all around infectious bastard once again horus8 [crowd pelts him with joints and g-strings he motions his hands for a hushing effect] good evening poets and frauds it's time for 'random encounters' the only show on poem ranker that allows us to dig into the amateur files, to remember the poets we've lost, and to find the poets we'll need to remember..that undiscovered poet could be you> here we see mutant x taking a wild stab at teenage love and the inevitable bitter seperation of highschool sweethearts, and 'wrist slashing' let's just be friends. 6.
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