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18-Jan-03/5:23 PM |
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a ha ha HA! great scott..that was loads of fun ha ha ha,,i was like, where the fuck is this boring thing going? than whack! ta da.8.
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| Re: Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit |
18-Jan-03/5:53 PM |
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| Re: The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY |
18-Jan-03/5:55 PM |
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remember scooby doo and the moon beast? great episode.
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| Re: Charlottesville by New Life Drug |
18-Jan-03/5:57 PM |
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"I was torn like the lighting in the sky." lightning? i believe this could use a could re-editing. Then it'd be a real tamale.
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| Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
18-Jan-03/5:59 PM |
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and you Know this, ma-an!
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| Re: Don't Think Of Me by Dariana |
18-Jan-03/6:02 PM |
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somehow, i don't think thats possible. repent!
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| Re: picture loops by pomoxo |
18-Jan-03/9:25 PM |
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| Re: picture loops by pomoxo |
18-Jan-03/9:38 PM |
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My opinion of your poem at second glance gave me the feeling that you dug to deep, and or 'tried too hard'. which is very common at this level of poetic 'excellence'. lol. Perhaps write a pretty, and simple sonnet..to get back to nature. You use very descriptive and powerful words..to many three syllabel words in a row can play fuckidge on the tongue. If you can dig. other than that. I feel that you've gotten off here at a galloping start. I detect something familiar about your writing, but...it doesn't matter. congradulations on the 8 and poem. Enjoy your stay here.
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| Re: For Horus by INTRANSIT |
18-Jan-03/9:58 PM |
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every time i read this..i just snicker. 8.
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| Re: The importance of lighting by blackball |
19-Jan-03/1:45 AM |
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Sound like the last dance saved8.
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| Re: The Smurfs killed Kennedy by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Jan-03/3:51 PM |
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A long sentenced miracle. hack.
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| Re: Award acceptance speach by Bobjim |
20-Jan-03/3:56 PM |
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Would you be willing to let us in on how you assume anyone could possibly afford to fucking give a shit?
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| Re: Award acceptance speach by Bobjim |
20-Jan-03/3:58 PM |
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| Re: The Militarization of America by Quarton |
20-Jan-03/4:03 PM |
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I believe this to be very poetic indeed GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD FOR SINKING NAILS DEEP AND SIMPLE on this fine day. 10! did you ever think that you'd get one?(TGQ), i honestly didn't.
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| Re: YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim |
20-Jan-03/4:08 PM |
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Why then do you furrow? Granted, i sometimes wish one of mine had funny orange ears, but then...i remember..something important. Talent, a thing you a lack exclusively.
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| Re: Wanking by Bobjim |
20-Jan-03/4:12 PM |
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If one asks of your metier..do you reply, "the art of dehumarizing the universe?". no, it's all in the name of meatloaf and chin hair on woman. You are boot to curb scrapings Sir. a cad, or quite possibly a cadet.
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| Re: Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT |
20-Jan-03/5:33 PM |
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21-Jan-03/5:08 PM |
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21-Jan-03/5:10 PM |
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| Re: 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub |
21-Jan-03/5:21 PM |
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