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20 most recent comments by horus8 (1241-1260)

regarding some deleted poem... 8-Jun-03/11:06 PM
The trick is that the strings and knife aren't really there. Therefore, your pretentious observation is paranoid futile projection based on what they taught you a knife and string were. What if you lived on an island, Islander, and on this island knives were actually tongue depressors, and strings were actually magical flying tampons. While the action of cutting, symbolized 'love'. Well, now that would change everything wouldn't it? No, it wouldn't, figure that one out, and you'll then also realize that this poem is about you not knowing you, and thinking that it's the other way around, and that's a magical flying tampon only you can love with a tongue depressor. Yes! Another belt slash upon the belt of horus8 THE AVENGER!
Re: one grey dream by crwncka1 9-Jun-03/10:58 AM
That, or close to a freeway.
Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 9-Jun-03/11:15 AM
How about I record this?
Re: Beam reach by INTRANSIT 9-Jun-03/11:18 AM
Sound
Re: B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy by spank me baby yeah 10-Jun-03/12:32 PM
So.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jun-03/12:35 PM
Defense.
Disappeared.
I write because I like bad company.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jun-03/12:38 PM
A let down.
Re: Oil Spill by scitz 10-Jun-03/12:42 PM
Milk spill (Free verse) by spitz

Boob sprays clear death
Nipples grow to eager mouths.
Silicon breakfast.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jun-03/12:44 PM
descarte
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Jun-03/12:45 PM
That was pitiful, really.
Re: Baginga by JoyLuck 10-Jun-03/12:46 PM
a waste of typos
Re: This guy by Jai 11-Jun-03/11:43 AM
You are, not your. Idiot.
Re: The first time by Jai 11-Jun-03/11:45 AM
No, because your sheets are covered in poop, not blood.
Re: He says by Jai 11-Jun-03/11:46 AM
I would say, "go for a long walk on a short pier".
Re: 5 minutes by Jai 11-Jun-03/11:48 AM
You are a supreme ass boil.
Re: moment in time by calilegzzz 11-Jun-03/11:53 AM
I believe you need to muster your nude form back to the typing table, there are some serious typos and horrible flaws in this poem, but the sentiment was maintained, somehow.
Re: Daddy's Girl by LosT SykoPath 11-Jun-03/11:56 AM
Great haiku! 10!
Re: Im Sorry by LosT SykoPath 11-Jun-03/11:58 AM
Good god you are a fucking spinner.
Re: -none by LosT SykoPath 11-Jun-03/11:59 AM
lol.
Re: Dream Girl by LosT SykoPath 11-Jun-03/12:02 PM
Naughty.


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