Re: Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT	11-Jun-03/12:44 PM
and bare feet. (I'll send you my edit from last night, it obviously didn't reach you, stand by).
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-03/12:45 PM
Weird.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-03/12:47 PM
Picasso.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-03/12:50 PM
This poem flows like cholesterol in Dom Delouis. You make it impossible for anyone to read it, why? Why in the fuck would you do that? Such a simple thought and message, and you've been waiting your whole fucking life to say it, and it comes out like this? You are A GAFF PICASSO CHICK. Use an axe, it's more effecient.
Re: Ga-go, a Filippino play, by a not Filippino man. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	12-Jun-03/8:12 AM
Is this what you do while I sleep Jeremi? Please vote NO PEOPLE TO THE sag merger my buddy Esai Morales said so.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:23 AM
The hooker* exploded upon insertion of the pufferfish**. *marshmallow **marshmallow
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:30 AM
Hobble
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:50 AM
The Whirr (Free verse) by Craychus Edited by H8 It is today again. Tomorrow, is also going to be today, again. Get my drift? The greatness of my futile vision As I sit square, and straight. Melting into the cold grill under my steamed glass window. Catching pulses of life occassionally shuffle by. Shuffle shuffle gone. The deafening shuffle scrapes upon the paper thin hollowness all too long. Revealing the yawning gape of truth underneath and in between. Where, one day, I will dive in with whispers and screams to soften its black walls. The faces of my loved ones frozen & cracked, like the reflection in mirrors I pass to often. Today, has become yesterday already, and so will tomorrow become today tomorrow Moaning in slow motion. While I refuse to learn. [Would that help, no, probably not] I yearn for the bliss of instant relief. In that one second when life’s tape ends. The whirr The whirr of rewind begins, but I'm thinking that it was there all along. My wounds disappear. My strength replenished. Then the whir fades back, from where it came Leaving me knowing I will hurt again.
Re: Jellybean Land by JoyLuck	12-Jun-03/9:27 AM
flu would work better than poo because it has poo in it with barf piss and fever stink. aye?
Re: Fate Sucks by Kitch	12-Jun-03/9:35 AM
Heeker, is a hermetic geek that leaks. No, it means, not to shabby. But if you ever fucking 6 my prostitute series again I'll fucking bring the heek and cook it over your abdomen in jerk sauce with rice pilaf and eat pudding out of your arm pits Kitch, I'm serious, you are not a good enough writer yet to six my prostitute series. I will let you know when you are, trust me. Now this poem above me is a perfect example of a six, there is a difference between a 7 and a six, Kitch this is a six.
Re: Her Smile's Salvation by Win	12-Jun-03/9:39 AM
God, I lost the feeling in my legs reading that... wait a minute? I don't even have legs. ARGHHHHHHH.
Re: one starry night by crwncka1	12-Jun-03/10:47 AM
You are a bundle of dynamite by golly, it's locust, by the way.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/10:53 AM
It's not as bad as my sister(god's wife, made it). Whirls is mispelt and there is a series of unnecessary colons, that's all.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/6:45 PM
You're right, just like that.
Re: Way She Makes Me Feel by capachijim	12-Jun-03/7:04 PM
"(words to Aeries’ Theme from FF7)" What does that mean? You didn't write this? Because, this unlike your other work is tolerable, so I'm just assuming that's because you copied it, right?!
Re: Way She Makes Me Feel by capachijim	12-Jun-03/7:06 PM
Did you mean Aries? As in the greek gos of war, or Aeries, as in 'an' tuskless walrus? Because, i need to know for personal reasons.
Re: Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Jun-03/7:22 PM
lol. You're right. Good god you are the pinkbunnyof doom. I mean, yeah, I had my doubts but never again this is indeed something I will never understand (at least not while you're in earshot) I'm sure whe you're gone though... We'll bust this fucker open like a pinata and analyse your horribly obvious flaws, such as mouthing cock and touching your bum (when you're asleep we'll talk behing your bunny trailor). Which will be at 9:00 pm I imagine from the parental rating on this poem of rated (T) for toddlers. Don't you ever attack, or get passionate about something pink bunny, I mean for the love of piss! bring the DOOM not the loom?
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:35 PM
lovely.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jun-03/8:51 PM
Perhaps, you should call him an "ass-hat"? A very poignant word created by razorgrin I believe.
Re: lucid building peace by nolan	12-Jun-03/9:21 PM
loquidy? Bravo, may I put a picture of Mao in?