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Way She Makes Me Feel

by capachijim

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jun 2003 · Edited 12 Jun 2003 · 6 comments

Little one, Precious one, Innocent as anything could be. Pretty once, Patient one, But alas one I never dared to show. Dark as night, Bright as day, Is the girl who I have loved so. But time goes on, People change, Time goes by, Love surely would die… But there is a nagging doubt, That there might have been Something special in her That I had missed, Something deep inside. Witty one, Daring one, Always out to summon up a smile. Perfect one, Lovely one, In the world, never one so fair, Made me feel the way She makes me feel.

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6 comments

[n/a] horus8 12-Jun-03/7:04 PM Reply
"(words to Aeries’ Theme from FF7)" What does that mean? You didn't write this? Because, this unlike your other work is tolerable, so I'm just assuming that's because you copied it, right?!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › horus8 12-Jun-03/7:08 PM Reply
No, it means these words are intended to be "lyrics" to some instrumental piece of music from Final Fantasy 7. Which is gay.
[n/a] horus8 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Jun-03/7:12 PM Reply
Oh, well... Carry on then.
[n/a] horus8 12-Jun-03/7:06 PM Reply
Did you mean Aries? As in the greek gos of war, or Aeries, as in 'an' tuskless walrus? Because, i need to know for personal reasons.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › horus8 12-Jun-03/7:13 PM Reply
No. Japanese "RPGS" have a wretched tradition of inserting "ae" in everyone's name. It makes the fuckwits who play them feel like their characters are magical and special because they have "ae" in their name.

God I fucking hate console RPGS. They're not games. They're just really shitly-animated cartoons with no plot except "Boy wakes up, saves world, says '...' 200 times, has a special relationship with his special girl friend who also says '...'", and playing it is just pressing a button over and over and over and feeling strong and powerful and special because your characters' numbers have increased.

Games where your 'stats' increase are for dickchins who can't actually improve at games so they have to simulate it by making their characters 'improve'. Thanks!
[2] JoyLuck 13-Jun-03/3:55 PM Reply
twinkle twinkle little star