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Way She Makes Me Feel (Lyric) by capachijim

Little one, Precious one, Innocent as anything could be. Pretty once, Patient one, But alas one I never dared to show. Dark as night, Bright as day, Is the girl who I have loved so. But time goes on, People change, Time goes by, Love surely would die… But there is a nagging doubt, That there might have been Something special in her That I had missed, Something deep inside. Witty one, Daring one, Always out to summon up a smile. Perfect one, Lovely one, In the world, never one so fair, Made me feel the way She makes me feel.

horus8 12-Jun-03/7:04 PM
"(words to Aeries’ Theme from FF7)" What does that mean? You didn't write this? Because, this unlike your other work is tolerable, so I'm just assuming that's because you copied it, right?!




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