| Re: Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer |
9-Aug-03/3:52 PM |
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See now this is a poem. Hands downm a great observation, but statues are hand made Willows are not, and Joes are never lucky it always runs out during the switch from boy to man. 10.
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| Re: Both Of me by Lady_of_the_night |
9-Aug-03/4:00 PM |
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Try actually asking. Communicating is more than insults, tantrums and posture. It takes both subjects to compromise.
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| Re: Dialogism by Nicholas Jones |
11-Aug-03/11:46 AM |
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Probably one of the best Sonnets on Poemranker, and, as always, very intelligent and observant.
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| Re: WHY IS THE MEDIA SO LONDON-CENTRIC? Written last Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
11-Aug-03/12:03 PM |
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I hate late at night when your legs begin sweating and you're not even moving? I hate that kind of heat.
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| Re: C a n n i b a l by scitz |
11-Aug-03/6:20 PM |
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| Re: Ali Abbas Welcome To England by scitz |
11-Aug-03/6:21 PM |
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11-Aug-03/6:24 PM |
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"But who lie beyond his grasp" Change 'who' to 'that'. And make your last line better and more concrete and abstract.
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| Re: Street Prostitute: Dark Angel by Don-Quixote |
11-Aug-03/6:27 PM |
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"from your lips" of your lips. The rest he will consider trite and unmoving unfortunately. Since he's lipless.
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| Re: Maine Freeze by http://mulberryfairy |
11-Aug-03/6:34 PM |
Some very good lines here.
"absentmindedly holding my breath"
Was my fave. I often do that, especially for some reason when I'm writing.
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| Re: Memorial Park by Mona Lisa |
11-Aug-03/6:36 PM |
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"in to" into. Good title and nice 465.
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| Re: Please vote zero by King Abdullah I |
11-Aug-03/6:40 PM |
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11-Aug-03/6:42 PM |
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| Re: American Hiker by Garrett S Sexton |
11-Aug-03/6:44 PM |
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| Re: soul mate by crwncka1 |
11-Aug-03/6:51 PM |
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Yeah, well spare us the broken wind then.
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| Re: fallen love by crwncka1 |
11-Aug-03/6:54 PM |
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Yes, it's the "foil age" alright. Just keep smoking yours.
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| Re: four walls by crwncka1 |
11-Aug-03/6:57 PM |
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Your baby needs to bite off your fat bitch nipple. Pear assed hacks.
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| Re: one day, one moment by crwncka1 |
11-Aug-03/7:02 PM |
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Yes, surely and what pearls to lose at that aye?
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| Re: Concieted Checkmate. by LuckyJoe |
11-Aug-03/7:57 PM |
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Yes, and castles gallop very well. You are a sod, and a cad.
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| Re: A Day Like The Last by dragonfly |
11-Aug-03/9:09 PM |
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"I'm a 20 year old gay college student in San Francisco. Nuff said. = )" I believe that there's never enough to say about that personally.
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| Re: Molecular Parasitology Nerdcore Rap by Retaliate |
13-Aug-03/12:18 AM |
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Sounds like you need a vacation.
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