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20 most recent comments by horus8 (841-860)

Re: Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe 3-Aug-03/2:00 PM
Did you think the person was a guy or a girl?
Did the guy or girl take the pill, or not?
Did they have sex, or was the guy or girl just in intense thought?
Did the guy or girl leave or stay afterwards?

let's answer these shall we?

1. Neither, I thought they were you
2. Yes, but it was no pill it was black cock.
3. Neither,they mudwrestled their egos and lost miserably
4. Both, but astroprejectedly.
Re: In Gold Leaf by bearhead 3-Aug-03/2:04 PM
That went over like a Led Zepplin.
Re: A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote 3-Aug-03/2:06 PM
Brilliant.
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Aug-03/2:10 PM
"The Onomatopoeia of our bodies" Wow, that sounds like an anniversary plaque that would fly off the shelves at Walmart. Especially in the pathetically contrived & ripped off culture I'm sure you get off on waving "hi, mr. smith too".
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Aug-03/10:39 PM
Yes! Lucifer
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Aug-03/10:41 PM
Good stuff as always.
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Aug-03/10:42 PM
Which birds would those be? Owls and nightingales?
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww 4-Aug-03/10:50 AM
If you've lost any of the comments? I have them all here. Also, Museheart, you should know that I truly do feel that deep down inside... You are a cunt and a tremendous one at that. That was proof. LOL. The Fraser, as always, comes through as a champion. Of what, I've often asked myself, but now I know... A Champion of cruci-fiction.
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww 4-Aug-03/11:02 AM
Look at this

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Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar (Free verse) by horus8
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Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte (Other) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?=54997

Museheart is Bipolar for Horus8 (Other) by wRGalletw
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=55533

STIGMA / MUSEHEART (Free verse) by JoyLuck
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=54400

My BPD vs Yours (Ode) by OneFingerAnswer
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=55646

Musehearts Swimming Lessons (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=55603

This is my id url: museheart
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from there you can check comments, etc.


You will also see hate poems, words like 'nigger,' 'KKK,' and total
disrespect and hate for gays, non-whites, almost every poem has profanity
and sex as its subject or title.  I am not against erotic writing but porn
is another
thing.  This site gives you no warning at all for what you are about to
stumble upon and I wonder how many
minors have.

It is not a pretty place."

"It's not a pretty place" HA! ha!
tht's priceless. As a bipolar bears molar
I concure.
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww 4-Aug-03/11:33 AM
I am of the opinion that she's not a horribly evil cunt. I'm just saying most writers learn at a young age that you have to emotionally seperate yourself from your writing in order to survive. She's obviously very attached to hers' as are most amateurs, but in all honesty I think she's probably just in need of a friend outside of her burnt out spheres. Bipolars burn bridges quicker than retreating Russians.
Re: Karma by http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/11:38 AM
nothing a tanning bed and pedicure can't ratify.
Re: Eight thousand clay tiles by abecedarian 4-Aug-03/3:56 PM
http://www.barmitzvahdisco.com/
Re: He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K 6-Aug-03/7:27 PM
What a bummer, it was so good till you tossed the end.
Re: Yellow Cake for Everyone by Retaliate 7-Aug-03/3:01 AM
No.
Re: Portsmouth belle 3 by Garrett S Sexton 8-Aug-03/7:22 PM
This must be your idea of being sneaky and intelligent, and above it all. I agree.
Re: The Bunny, The Wench, and The Troll by Billy Fights 8-Aug-03/7:26 PM
I believe this poem to be worthy of much praise and an 'evolving' of your work.
Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Aug-03/8:19 PM
There you go #1. Now you can never say I never did nothing for you. Oh, and he's not a lady. He's an alien monkey head in a palanquin that likes to fuck with the Israelites and ragheads.Why I'm here to watch? Is the last of my worrys, and honestly, bores me to death and why religion is an utter waste of time and only works to seperate us as humans, more than color or sex ever will.
Re: Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 8-Aug-03/8:51 PM
Submerged in what? If it's the only thing left in the room? Perhaps, it's submerging into it's own submergence?

As my Mentor would say "You've strung together some wonderful words here."
Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit 9-Aug-03/2:35 PM


http://www.salon.com/media/1998/09/01media.html

I think you will appreciate this. Every good writer ultimately needs and editor. Even Stan rice had and editor!

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horus8 24.126.113.154
09-Aug-03, 12:46 PM



Editors edit not theorize about the benefits of editors. Misses Peabody from NFG magazine couldn't edit a cantalope for breakfast with her staff of flunkys. That is my opinion, and if she wants to disagree she can put her writing and editing where her mouth is, because I have yet to see any literature that would contrast my point. As for the eighties and Lish? Who gives a fuck. And as for Stan Rice... Ha ha! You care more about that guy and bring him up more than I ever have. Cheers.
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poetandknowit 67.40.59.239
09-Aug-03, 01:48 PM



Your right, you do not need an editor. You write perfect little ditties. Sorry about the declines from NFG. However, I bet you are declined a lot because no one understands how deep and poetic you are. Fuck them all. You are better than that and deep, deep underground. Maybe I was thinking different for a minute, but no, you are a joke.
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horus8 24.126.113.154
09-Aug-03, 02:27 PM



You are an idiot. I do need an editor you ass. That's what I'm fucking saying? An editor takes the poetry and edits it, sends it back to the author for approval, or any of his changes, then vice versa again until it satisfies both all parties included. you know that as well as I do. When you have a board of editors half of which can't write, and ALL contradicting each other's suggestions while even unaware that they're doing that? I mean give me a break... Ha ha, Oh and through the entire process the poet is called on to do the actual editing via vague contradictory suggestions? I believe that to be a joke. I need an editor that edits. You are a joke Mrs. Peabody, not I. So let's review. I need an editor. I love editors, but only editors that indeed 'edit'. If you think for a moment Lish edited from the phone verbally, or by offering his writers a one sentence critique you my friend are the joke because, that man wrote while 'editing', he made the appropriate changes, okayed it with the author in question, and then sent it through. You are a lazy idiot to think otherwise, not that I didn't know that already Senior asswear.
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horus8 24.126.113.154
09-Aug-03, 02:34 PM



Oh, and by the way, fuck you. Your poetry sucks. Rest assured in knowing it's not about who's better than who, or "underground" or any of that shit you fucking pretentious jealous twit. It's about the art form and the magic of story telling... You fucking think I care so much about image, and you couldn't be farther from the heart. Any day any time any where you say when, and I will put your argument in the trash can where it belongs along with your contrived selfish agenda. Poet and Knowit? Yeah, how fucking ridiculous does that user name sound, and you call me a joke. HA!
Re: Undertow by eliastemplar 9-Aug-03/2:38 PM
MMMMMMM. Yep maybe 'last' summer?


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