| Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams |
1-Aug-03/2:09 AM |
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Childish and honest, brave. 8
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| Re: Bed by swift_enterprises |
1-Aug-03/1:13 PM |
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Nothing ground breaking here, but that's pleasant occasionally, normality in simple observations and respect for the natural world around you. 7
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1-Aug-03/1:36 PM |
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1-Aug-03/1:40 PM |
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I expected this one too have comprimised is anal retentiveness, but sadly I was let down. Therefore I must dock you a point and merely give you a nine. I enjoyed these very much, may I use them for propaganda leaflets?
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| Re: Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II |
1-Aug-03/1:41 PM |
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| Re: Migratory Reptile by eliastemplar |
1-Aug-03/1:45 PM |
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The end could be strengthened and overall I had fun with this piece. 7.
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1-Aug-03/1:47 PM |
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Ha Ha ha ha, a treasure, ha ha. What a hip toss. That was like Kerry Voneric and the iron claw, what a riot.
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1-Aug-03/4:06 PM |
5-7-6. Lovely none the less.
Mart/yre/d.
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| Re: The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar |
1-Aug-03/4:07 PM |
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Well that's a happening piece.
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| Re: Clay Man by eliastemplar |
1-Aug-03/4:35 PM |
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1-Aug-03/4:37 PM |
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| Re: Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
2-Aug-03/11:50 AM |
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And to think... I thought you were talentless?
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| Re: marlon by bearhead |
2-Aug-03/11:56 AM |
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| Re: A Dreamers Cookery: Cosmic Gardener [edited] by SupremeDreamer |
2-Aug-03/12:08 PM |
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Sir, your new glasses obviously have confused a raisen for your divinity complex-ion.
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| Re: Almost forgotten by Agemo-Z |
2-Aug-03/12:11 PM |
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2-Aug-03/1:00 PM |
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Righto! go check out horus8 at garageband.com to read the reviews on our songs mate. I have to go to a wedding, see you later.
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3-Aug-03/1:48 PM |
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3-Aug-03/1:53 PM |
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"I not ready to hear what you might tell." It would be nice if you made this sentence legible Dan, add an "am". Also, from the beginning I knew you were the old man straight through. Not to spoil your surprise, of course, just a fact. Perhaps it's the SS check?
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3-Aug-03/1:55 PM |
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I think you need a different word than disheveled.
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| Re: Bearings by emilyowey |
3-Aug-03/1:56 PM |
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What the hell is that going to do? What are you going to take the vapor and make a fucking sandwich? Good grief.
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