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Migratory Reptile (Free verse) by eliastemplar There is only one migratory reptile
it's formations are obscene
Each carries it's own dung heap
from sea to shining sea
Some die only halfway
from hefting too much crap
Better them than me
humans aren't so fast.
Up the ladder:
Broken Hearted
Down the ladder:
Prop a Panda
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Posted: August 1, 2003 9:09 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2003 9:09 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.230521 Overall Rank: 4226 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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1-Aug-03/1:45 PM
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The end could be strengthened and overall I had fun with this piece. 7.
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