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Migratory Reptile (Free verse) by eliastemplar

There is only one migratory reptile it's formations are obscene Each carries it's own dung heap from sea to shining sea Some die only halfway from hefting too much crap Better them than me humans aren't so fast.

horus8 1-Aug-03/1:45 PM
The end could be strengthened and overall I had fun with this piece. 7.




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