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Haiku № 1669

Bed

by swift_enterprises

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 May 2002 · 3 comments

Cool kiss of a breeze Springtime through open windows The morning lingers

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3 comments

[3] anonymous 19-May-02/12:39 AM Reply
nice, reminiscent, conjuring.

not as cool as air-conditioning I am hoping, turn it DOWN....
[7] horus8 1-Aug-03/1:13 PM Reply
Nothing ground breaking here, but that's pleasant occasionally, normality in simple observations and respect for the natural world around you. 7
[3] Hostileintent 10-Aug-03/6:48 AM Reply
come on, a bit of effort.nice imagery, but it could be much better