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Bed (Haiku) by swift_enterprises Cool kiss of a breeze
Springtime through open windows
The morning lingers
Up the ladder:
Sunshine
Down the ladder:
sewer rat
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.818182
Posted: May 12, 2002 8:09 AM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2002 8:09 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.803466 Overall Rank: 1689 Comments:
Nothing ground breaking here, but that's pleasant occasionally, normality in simple observations and respect for the natural world around you. 7
come on, a bit of effort.nice imagery, but it could be much better
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not as cool as air-conditioning I am hoping, turn it DOWN....