Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal	19-Sep-02/11:52 PM
i wont read this again. ever.
Re: while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit	19-Sep-02/11:54 PM
pleasantly wrapped up.hows the surf though?
Re: On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit	19-Sep-02/11:59 PM
i thought i voted on this one all ready...ah well maybe deja view!? the work of a jew? my corked kangaroo...kill mr. magoo? but enough of that nonsense...you have a valid and well observed point..i know..just barely cuz my son jusat started pre-school...sorry to hear about the soup...i'll send you a smoother upswinged recipe next time...
Re: Wedding Day... by loneshadow29	20-Sep-02/12:02 AM
but what?...you wanted him to give you the old ins and outs instead of her huh?...aye..my love! that's it precisely one boy one girl and a scorned one living in denial.. pray for forgiveness your mind is unclean.
Re: quickie by <~>	20-Sep-02/12:11 AM
looks like a drunk peeing in the snow you purring little cloud leopard you...hi z..!! missing you! can't wait to finish up this play..so much fucking rehearsal it's cutting into my ranking time...im just a bit perturbed...bastards..can you believe someone...hmm.hmm. labled some of bachus' poems stolen..hah! i know that piker and his hoof might be bitter, but he still has fucking pride...bastards wish they could dismiss him that easy..i know he's not one for ass kissing but jesus, to rewrite someone elses work is totally pathetic(cutting out and pasting is different, but only if it's darkangels&company and going in the bachus tribunal) can you imagine...of course they would never accuse you of that..so do me a favor..flip them off for bachus' and "for my friends"!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/12:18 AM
top notch...needs a good chinning. i'm suprised you didn't name weird al or strunm thurmin...my poem is a sleeping senator..a puddle of druel creeping towards the microphone...my poem is tom york's dead eye looking at uranus while singing to your penis blee blee...i love you magical poem (you have hot pink laderhosens)...i love you magic poem (your beauty is in your baseball cleats)..blee blee.... i never new a fruit salad could be returned for a famous blue rain coat. than. i met you.
Re: Thank You Mom by savannah	20-Sep-02/12:21 AM
i have a severe oedipus complex. leave this on a sticky note in her car next time could you. jesus christ..it's like christmas in vancouver or something. fuck! but since it is your mom.. 3.
Re: Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus	20-Sep-02/12:28 AM
if you read the left first and then all of the right in <666> it sounds way better...you should tag this one with that warning "read everything with out <> first and then all the <> in order from top to bottom next..carry on
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/12:30 AM
HORUS8 LATE NIGHT GOLDEN QUE TIP AWARD!recipient...this is a winner...i'll send you your free dinner! email me your info and your beef jerky will be there in seven to ten working days.
Re: blockbuster by bondjedi	20-Sep-02/12:34 AM
how about a vin deisel poster with your sour patch kids...piker. i got your big fat greek wedding right here...
Re: Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn	20-Sep-02/12:37 AM
you used condemnation...i like depeche mode..you win..
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/12:40 AM
good point...the hollow man stuff and all that other stuff was good stuff yep nice clean wholesome stuff....has anyone seen the bathroom..i'm kinda lost..oh thankyou..excuse me...ralph.
Re: Lonely World by rottweiler1982	20-Sep-02/12:42 AM
lol! this geats the horus8 "pure talent award for late night poetry...you sir are no rottweiler you are a weiner dog with a crooked tail and a gas problem.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-02/12:51 AM
rock on sis! my shows coming up...you really should do something with the title...could i recommend something? how about underdogging cupid or equipoise saved the ranch hand or feeling tomatoes when i really just need a warm cucumber? just taking a stab in the dark..that's it.." a stab in the dark"! ta da!
Re: My Mountain (An ode to the nature poem) by Bachus	22-Sep-02/10:20 AM
see.. if i didn't have such a superman haircut..i could be as ironic as this flatulent piker. i think ? i
Re: I'm your father! by flatliner	22-Sep-02/10:23 AM
very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!
Re: the place by ThreeFourSix	22-Sep-02/10:29 AM
if you are a guru..i am the shit leak streaming over my flexing calf muscle currently..this suffers from elitism and bad images with no concrete foundation...name a god name a place..name a flower...never be vague...because say you say lilac or asgard or pluto...theseus.. all of a sudden you allow people to have much much more in common with the piece, because their favorite flower is lilac their favorite god is hades and so on...good luck here at poemranker...toooddless.
Re: yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh	22-Sep-02/10:34 AM
take out the last sentence and this fucker is a nucleur hotcake fuck you get the HORUS8 JESUS AND HITLER WERE FRIENDS AWARD FOR POETRY on this fine 22 of september..enjoy..seriously consider dropping that last sentence though less is more. 10.
Re: First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus	22-Sep-02/10:43 AM
did i write this?...I'VE BEEN PLAGARIZED help police help !! oh mighty jesu the cad has barrelled the falls....ha!!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Sep-02/10:47 AM
now that's crisp and sharpe! kill kill kill kill ha ha ha ha kill kill kill kill ha ha ha ha pil pil pil pil love love love love? hi z.l