| Re: Living Conditions by Christof |
29-Oct-02/7:33 AM |
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i know you are here, i can hear you breathing...
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| Re: Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus |
30-Oct-02/2:33 PM |
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brilliantly lewd and gruesome. what wonders would become you if you could forge a smile.
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| Re: Kindling by <~> |
30-Oct-02/2:35 PM |
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| Re: Poem Ranker by abecedarian |
30-Oct-02/2:50 PM |
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| Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore |
30-Oct-02/2:53 PM |
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sounds like a hymn, here in the heart of amber...
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30-Oct-02/2:56 PM |
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took me there. fine, drenched and sweet.
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| Re: i dunno by New Life Drug |
2-Nov-02/6:03 PM |
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oxymorons can work. writing about finding nothing to write about. leap out of the circle and show us.
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| Re: At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit |
2-Nov-02/6:08 PM |
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deep at the bottom is where we poets draw a well-spring. keep digging while looking back up at the light.
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| Re: Of this Moment! by feathers68 |
2-Nov-02/6:09 PM |
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| Re: Never Alone at Night by Limness |
2-Nov-02/6:13 PM |
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this longing throbs. the end line twirks a bit off line, but i can hear a heartbeat here.
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| Re: Three pointed star by INTRANSIT |
2-Nov-02/6:16 PM |
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dont wanna be a purist, but, 6 beats on the last line...
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| Re: Sun in my Middle by anitawit |
2-Nov-02/6:20 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Nov-02/6:31 PM |
i see what you mean, the message mirrors mine.
do proof it, (not to be such a pain in the arse) e.g. he's, Until... //// i love it
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| Re: Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8 |
4-Nov-02/6:35 PM |
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poetry wars have begun and i do believe horus has taken the first shot.
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18-Nov-02/6:37 PM |
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| Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus |
18-Nov-02/6:41 PM |
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heartache through and through.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Nov-02/6:43 PM |
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yes. alot of images here from some landscape torn apart. have to walk through it carefully.
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| Re: Handy Smurf by Bachus |
18-Nov-02/6:56 PM |
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i guess i should have paid more attention to the smurfs thang.
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| Re: Papa Smurf by Bachus |
20-Nov-02/6:13 PM |
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where is the leap where God comes through? is there one in smurfdom?
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| Re: Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/6:14 PM |
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did she want to shop at target and got there late without a date?
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