on The Breathing Dead by Caducus
18 Nov 2002, 6:41 PM
heartache through and through.
on Poem Ranker by abecedarian
30 Oct 2002, 2:50 PM
who stole your shine?
on Papa Smurf by Bachus
20 Nov 2002, 6:13 PM
where is the leap where God comes through? is there one in smurfdom?
on Night-mare by INTRANSIT
20 Nov 2002, 6:14 PM
did she want to shop at target and got there late without a date?
on Going to River Phoenix in my mind by horus8
20 Nov 2002, 6:18 PM
i want some of that yellow bellied sap sucking juice in a cup next time you go out on that bridge, send some up!
on Handy Smurf by Bachus
18 Nov 2002, 6:56 PM
i guess i should have paid more attention to the smurfs thang.
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2002, 6:31 PM
i see what you mean, the message mirrors mine.
do proof it, (not to be such a pain in the arse) e.g. he's, Until... //// i love it
do proof it, (not to be such a pain in the arse) e.g. he's, Until... //// i love it
on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
4 Nov 2002, 6:35 PM
poetry wars have begun and i do believe horus has taken the first shot.
on i dunno by New Life Drug
2 Nov 2002, 6:03 PM
oxymorons can work. writing about finding nothing to write about. leap out of the circle and show us.
on At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit
2 Nov 2002, 6:08 PM
deep at the bottom is where we poets draw a well-spring. keep digging while looking back up at the light.
on Of this Moment! by feathers68
2 Nov 2002, 6:09 PM
too many moments here.
on Never Alone at Night by Limness
2 Nov 2002, 6:13 PM
this longing throbs. the end line twirks a bit off line, but i can hear a heartbeat here.
on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT
2 Nov 2002, 6:16 PM
dont wanna be a purist, but, 6 beats on the last line...
on Sun in my Middle by anitawit
2 Nov 2002, 6:20 PM
yes
on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus
30 Oct 2002, 2:33 PM
brilliantly lewd and gruesome. what wonders would become you if you could forge a smile.
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
30 Oct 2002, 2:53 PM
sounds like a hymn, here in the heart of amber...
on some deleted poem
30 Oct 2002, 2:56 PM
took me there. fine, drenched and sweet.
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2002, 6:37 PM
bravo
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2002, 6:43 PM
yes. alot of images here from some landscape torn apart. have to walk through it carefully.