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Of this Moment! (Free verse) by feathers68
What is it of this moment that sparkles in your soul. It is of this moment that I love as it is what is here. What is of this moment that the stars shine in such lusters moment? Of this moment I shall take away what memories, sparkle across my soul, for the memories of golden moment touch my broken soul.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.6666665
Overall Rank: 12229
Posted: November 1, 2002 7:30 PM PST; Last modified: November 1, 2002 7:30 PM PST
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[n/a] daniella @ 200.61.42.54 | 2-Nov-02/6:09 PM | Reply
too many moments here.
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