| Re: Words by darkhelmet10 |
27-Dec-02/7:41 PM |
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31-Dec-02/7:41 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Dec-02/7:44 AM |
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i dont know...i guess its too unemotional for me...im not much of a reader for "landscape poetry"...5
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| Re: Found Lost by Carvaceous |
31-Dec-02/7:45 AM |
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i love the images, and those last two lines end it perfectly...8
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| Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil |
31-Dec-02/7:48 AM |
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thats a very interesting idea...crazy...but i like it...9
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| Re: new year's eve by razorgrin |
1-Jan-03/1:12 PM |
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yep...thats new years eve...WONDERFUL description...10
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| Re: Confused by debased |
1-Jan-03/1:13 PM |
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i like the repetition, would be awesome to hear somebody read this...8
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| Re: The Birds by lunar |
1-Jan-03/1:15 PM |
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wow...its good...but its almost too subtle, i can't quite see the story, but i love what i see so far...7
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| Re: Turn your back by kliq |
1-Jan-03/1:16 PM |
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its rhythm is somewhat messed up...makes reading it kind of jerky...4
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Jan-03/1:24 PM |
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interesting...but not quite my idea of a subject for a poem...5
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| Re: my journey--or the beginning of... by blurryphotograph |
5-Jan-03/8:20 AM |
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i told you i loved this poem. its you, its totally you...and the ending is wonderful...10
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8-Jan-03/4:30 AM |
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i like this poem. theres something there...something genius...8
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23-Jan-03/5:47 PM |
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wow!! i love how it starts out...and then how it continues...and how it ends...its just a great poem about a great style of music, and it flows so beautifully!...10
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| Re: Under a Streetlight in Paris by blurryphotograph |
23-Jan-03/5:53 PM |
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you KNOW i love this poem...((even if i hated you id give it a 9)) mwahahahahahaha
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| Re: he was scared. by blurryphotograph |
23-Jan-03/5:57 PM |
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you know i love this one too...but im giving you a 9 cause i just dont feel like giving it a 10
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| Re: Best Friends by Chels85 |
25-Jan-03/1:17 PM |
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the rhyme scheme seems kind of forced...and then it doesnt match a real rhythm of any kind....4
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| Re: Life's Unnoticables by apples_tim |
25-Jan-03/1:18 PM |
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| Re: The Considerate Lover by Tascobar |
25-Jan-03/1:21 PM |
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| Re: calendared by cobalt |
25-Jan-03/1:30 PM |
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i love the "breathes length into the day" interesting image..6
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| Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 |
25-Jan-03/1:33 PM |
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"I love you alone." thats great, i like that...6
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