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Best Friends (Free verse) by Chels85
We were the very best of friends, not so very long ago. What happened to that special bond, I may never know. You and I were one of a kind, Another like me, you will never find. The same goes for me! I look at the picture of us on the wall, Wondering, as I think of you, if you ever think me of at all? Do you miss me, as I miss you? Thinking of fun times, and things we used to do. Like driving in my car, singing with all our might, And going for a drive in the middle of the night! I've never cared for a friend, as much as I care for you, I just want to be the very best of friends again, please tell me that you do too. And what I could do to make this dream come true??? You know things about me, that no one else does, it's the same for me with you! You know how I think, and it's the same with you. You told me so much and I did my best to understand If at all I falter, I hope you will be there to lend me a hand and try to understand! Your shoulder was always open, for my tears to flow freely, I just wander if you have changed your mind?! I hope you will always be there in every way you can, a place where I can go to feel right at home! I'm telling you this now, so you will know how I truly feel, Hoping any anger or confusion, will someday quickly heal, so that we can be best friends still!

Up the ladder: NUDIST FLEET
Down the ladder: Sprinklers

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5714285
Weighted score: 4.615798
Overall Rank: 12446
Posted: September 24, 2002 4:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2002 4:50 PM PDT
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Comments:
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.185 | 24-Sep-02/8:10 PM | Reply
I'm sorry, this was so painful I could not make it through the first five lines.
[3] Tintagiles @ 198.164.219.155 | 25-Sep-02/7:31 PM | Reply
Too many exclamation marks, among other things. Far too many. Especially since they're useless.
[8] gadget @ 206.150.0.254 | 2-Oct-02/9:19 AM | Reply
Really enjoyed it
[4] rockinindividual @ 24.136.190.192 | 25-Jan-03/1:17 PM | Reply
the rhyme scheme seems kind of forced...and then it doesnt match a real rhythm of any kind....4
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