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Found Lost (Free verse) by Carvaceous
Thrown to the end of the world, so it seems Far away from this place you stand Tears fall, calling your name Knowing I've found myself to late Coming to terms, I understand my place Too far away I can't rejoice. My wants don't matter. I've been taken away I stand here, more than ever wanting to feel your warm embrace Your arms around, encircling me, As I struggle here shivering with uncertainty I try to chase the fear away on my own Now too late I feel a subtle kiss upon my cheek. Destined to stay, My hand numbs Searching for your hand, wishing it to be intertwined with mine. Remembering moments I lost myself In a second, being with you The wind howls blowing through this empty place. As blackened trees sway in monotone My sanity lies in the lightness of dreams Laying my head upon your shoulder Your heart beating to mine. Bringing myself to reality, leaving the daze look behind Remembering wishes don't come true, even on the stars.

Up the ladder: Music That Cannot Exist
Down the ladder: Parting the Curtains

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5556
Posted: December 30, 2002 2:08 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2002 2:09 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] rockinindividual @ 68.85.69.50 | 31-Dec-02/7:45 AM | Reply
i love the images, and those last two lines end it perfectly...8
[9] Topaz Servias @ 68.100.154.95 | 1-Jan-03/5:36 PM | Reply
My gosh, this is a memorable one, such pictures it plays into your mind, you relate to every word and hang on to the next.
[9] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 2-Jan-03/5:28 PM | Reply
Mind if I ask who inspired this?
[n/a] Carvaceous @ 68.100.130.217 > Freethinker1602 | 2-Jan-03/5:36 PM | Reply
That's my secret =-)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.35.154.196 > Carvaceous | 2-Jan-03/5:42 PM | Reply
lol! But I'm afraid your secret is that once upon a time you were at a sleep over at your friend's house and you did a poo in your bed and you were so ashamed that you secretly exchanged your soiled linen with the linen in your friend's bed so that it was they who were severely beaten, not you. My God you're disgusting!
[n/a] Carvaceous @ 68.100.130.217 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 2-Jan-03/7:47 PM | Reply
WoW! Your so pathetically sad that I just can't say anymore.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.98 > Carvaceous | 8-Jan-03/7:14 AM | Reply
You don't deny it, I see. Hey man I'm not sad! I have a busy social life and spend loads of time "hanging out" with friends and being really cool.
[3] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Jan-03/8:04 AM | Reply
and listening to nirvana
though your headphones
while completely NUDE!
(but in clean linen, at least.)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 > <~> | 8-Jan-03/8:06 AM | Reply
Nirvana smell. I only said it because it rhymed. (_(_);;;;;;;;D
[3] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Jan-03/8:08 AM | Reply
ah, the old one gun salute!
bravo, sirrah!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 > <~> | 8-Jan-03/8:14 AM | Reply
I will not stand for that contemptuous form of address any longer. Kindly address me as "-=Dark_Angel=-", or, failing that, "Captain Excellent".
[3] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Jan-03/8:16 AM | Reply
excellent, Captain -=Angel=-. i shall correct my usage forthwith, sirrrrrrrah!!!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 > <~> | 8-Jan-03/8:20 AM | Reply
You, woman, are a disgrace to this family, to this Towne, and to the King. I shall be speaking with Doctor about your wild ideas. I fear you have contracted Woman's Hysteria.
[3] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Jan-03/8:23 AM | Reply
also, dyspepsia and diphtheria. woe is me! i regret to inform the king's man that i will not be able to attend my flogging this morning. good day to you, sir!
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