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Under a Streetlight in Paris (Free verse) by blurryphotograph
Under a streetlight in Paris
A young man sits with his guitar
Playing softly to a woman who would never hear.
Like a child looking for that first star
He looks up at an empty window and sings
A flower of hope
Trapped inside the strings
With his song he tries to release it
Only to find it has turned to dust
The music rises like smoke
Tantalizing up to the window
The notes freeze and crack
And fall resolutely to the ground
It seems even hope has frozen
He starts to pack up
The night has turned colder.
A tear falls to the ground and shatters
He places his guitar in its case
It envelops the cold mahogany body
Shelters it from the cold.
His heart needs a cover
He decides to play a bit more
To place his heart out in the open
His fingers are raw from playing in the cold.
But yet he dreams...
A woman comes to the window high above
A satin dress encloses her perfect body
Even her silhouette is flawless.
She listens to the young man in tattered clothes.
The song that comes from that old guitar
Sings of love lost, love found, and love that could never be.
He plays an orchestra, with only six strings.
Something wet falls and shatters.
The man sees the tear fall and looks up
The window once framing her luminescent figure is empty.
The curtains drift slowly in the night air
The man is saddened, but he smiles to himself.
He keeps playing, hoping she will return.
Hope perhaps is the last thing keeping him alive.
And even that is wearing thin as his threadbare coat
That the wind travels through and he shivers
She does return
Like an addict to a drug
She is attracted to his song
Her cheeks are flushed with life
He plays on not looking up
He is conscious of his tattered clothes
His heart is torn
Between dreams and reality
So near yet so far
A window high above and a humble street corner.
Two worlds separated them
Brought together by a melancholy melody
He looks up, and their eyes meet.
Under a streetlight in Paris.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6533
Posted: January 11, 2003 2:06 PM PST; Last modified: January 11, 2003 2:06 PM PST
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