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Free verse № 38020

insomnia plunge

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

Night licks me off the thoughts of other human beings; They scratch out my sadness w/ sleep while I tweak through the quiet they create when they shut off their mediums and discontinue translations, the soft watery cinema projections that cloud the world like the stooping fog I now watch smother the valley- The film of silence that suspends All the structures, all the debts on which the lies and limits depend; And I'm awake to simmer in, summer down, crush, expand & watch so far into it all.

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[7] nentwined 26-Jan-03/4:24 AM Reply
interesting. I like the form a lot, but can't quite wrap myself around it nor submerge myself in it. yet... I like it.
[7] deleted user 26-Jan-03/7:06 AM Reply
hard to grip, but still very good