poemranker ::Words by darkhelmet10

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Free verse № 22544

Words

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

I closed my eyes, I saw your face. I held my breath, I felt your presence. I tell you I love you, But words aren't strong enough. My words are meaningless, They don't show how much I feel. All I can do, Is give you a kiss. I can hold you in my arms, And proove I'll always be there. You are my life, My hopes and my dreams. These words aren't much, But I give what I have.

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[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Dec-02/6:12 PM Reply
dark helmit? will you tighten my helmet? just..you..know..let me know if i'm wearing it right?
[4] rockinindividual 27-Dec-02/7:41 PM Reply
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