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Words (Free verse) by darkhelmet10
I closed my eyes, I saw your face. I held my breath, I felt your presence. I tell you I love you, But words aren't strong enough. My words are meaningless, They don't show how much I feel. All I can do, Is give you a kiss. I can hold you in my arms, And proove I'll always be there. You are my life, My hopes and my dreams. These words aren't much, But I give what I have.

Up the ladder: Ghetto Symphony
Down the ladder: morning

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Weighted score: 4.654218
Overall Rank: 12277
Posted: October 26, 2002 4:45 PM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2002 4:45 PM PDT
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[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Dec-02/6:12 PM | Reply
dark helmit? will you tighten my helmet? just..you..know..let me know if i'm wearing it right?
[4] rockinindividual @ 66.171.38.29 | 27-Dec-02/7:41 PM | Reply
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